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Practice 4
The importance of computer programming has been increasing (maybe add "all over the world" to make the sentence make more sense). As the structure of businesses to be computerised all over the world, ability of using computer is being important. The importance of this ability will keep increasing more as time goes on. As demand of programmers from companies have(has) increased, many number of students choose computer major in university(to major in computers at university. It is a big advantage when they graduate because people who studied other majors have felt (experienced) defficulites (difficulties*) to get (when searching for) a job. This is a reason why you should consider seriously choosing your major in university. Some people choose majors according to their interests or just (because) they like it, but this could not be a good decision after gradating (graduating*). Now(,) sometimes I 'm thinking like (think) what if I chose (a) different major when I was freshman? Maybe I could have more options to get a job now. It's complicate (complicated*). Life, which doesn't have a correct answer like an exam questions, has a lot of ways(paths) with (an) unforseen future. I don't know what I would be now, but I wish I could feel satisfaction on my life after ten years. I want to be a happy person.
Good job! :)
0 votedJuly 21, 20140Barney's diary
14.07.14 Barney's dairy
The day before yesterday, I hanged (hung) out (with) my cousin's friends by chance(This doesn't sound natural). At that moment, I found my ideal type's woman. I really wanted to talk with her, But I didn't catch any(get a) chance. And(Don't start a sentence with "and," you can say "also" here.) I thought She(this doesn't need to be capitalized, so just "she") already got(was) married because of (she was wearing a) ring. So, actually I (I was) disappointed.
Tonight, I heard good news. (Make the period a colon : ) She is single(.) and My cousin want(s) to find good guy who (to) introduce to her. I just shouted in my mind (,) "Hey sister!!!(In English we don't use titles like 오빠 or 누나..It would be really weird if you called an English girl "sister.") It's me~~ Why you can't (you) think (of) me next to you!!" But (don't start a sentence with "but." Instead use "However.") I can't say (it) for real :( Meanwhile, The subject is(was) changed before I knew it.
Anyway I'm supposed to come up with a plan to hang out with her.
But The problem is(,) It's(this doesn't need to be capitalized) not easy to(for) me to think of (a) way getting along (to hang out) with her. I don't know her's name,(or) address (and) so on. Actually(,) I don't have any information about her.
I know, The(doesn't need to be capitalized) best way is just to ask for my cousin help. But(However,) I can't ask her. How can I meet her one more (time) except for her helping ? (without asking her for help.)
plz correct wrong parts in my diary!Good job!
Just ask her to get coffee with you :)0 votedJuly 16, 20142Mistakes
Most of people usually make Mistakes(mistakes) in their life. This can be caused by lake (lack) of knowledge , misunderstanding(,) or carelessness. We usually take(spend) time thinking of(about our) mistakes and feel remorse of it, But,(put a period after "remorse" and never start a sentence with "but" instead use "However"). However, what we can't understand is that mistakes are necessary and expectable to get better and to avoid in the future (and required, so that we can learn from them). The most important thing,(comma not necessary) is to determine exactly what the mistake is and what are the reasons behind that (them). Then,(remove period and add a comma. Make this one sentence.) take care of it in the future. (change to "then, you can take care of it in the future.").
This was really good actually!
0 votedJuly 14, 20140i'm (I'm) really tired,sleepy and sad (you wouldn't say tired and sleepy in the same sentence. Essentially, they mean the same thing. So say "I'm really tired and sad."
it's (It's) 4:30 a.m,(Change to semi-colon). i (I) didn't sleep until now,(change to period). i(I) had many works to do (I had a lot of work to do) ,(Take out this comma. It's not necessary.) and i(I) had to study Turkish,(Make this comma a period and start a new sentence.) the(The) saddest thing was losing Argentina vs(change to "losing to) Germany by Gotze's goal
so(Don't start sentences with "so." You can use "therefore" instead.) i'm so tired,sleepy and sad(addressed in the first sentence.)Completely corrected your entry should say:
I'm really tired and sad. It's 4:30 a.m; I didn't sleep until now. I had a lot of work to do and I had to study Turkish. The saddest thing was Argentina losing to Germany by Gotze's goal. Therefore, I'm so tired and sad.Every time you're referring to yourself, you need to capitalize "I." Also, make sure you capitalize a new sentence. Put a space after your commas (,).
:)0 votedJuly 14, 20142- Here are the corrections: A: I'm good. Where you from?--- I'm good. Where are you from? A: Oh, nice! Are you stay here visiting or come for live?-- Oh, nice! Are you just visiting or did you come here to live? A: Really? What you more like?-- Really? What do you like about the city? B: The peoples. Everyone is happy, helpful and nice.-- The people. Everyone is happy, helpful and nice. B: More two days.-- Two more days. A: Nice... What cities you spent and what cities will you go?-- Nice... What cities have you been to and what cities are you going to? B: Yes, it is. Would love to stay longer.-- Yes, it is. I would love to stay longer. A: Well, you always is welcome.-- Well, you are always welcome. A: If you need something is only say.--If you need something, just let me know.0 votedJuly 14, 20140
Practice 1
This company has showed us significant growth during last 5 years. However, since the current two quarters, it seems that the company's net profit has been decreasing. We expect this (these) figures came from decreasing sales. Market demand trend seems that customers do not want to purchase our high-quality products, rather than, they choose cheaper ones. The gap between cheap models and premium models has reduced. There is no more merit buying premium models with paying more costs to customers. (This entire sentence sounds weird. I'm not sure what you're trying to say).
What the company should do now for the future? (You should either take this out or change the way it is phrased to "What should the company do now for the future?"). Experts say the company had (change to "has") to develop their own software, but they have outsourced by(to) another company so far. It is all expenses every product they are selling.(This sentence doesn't make sense. Maybe change it to, "The company is wasting more money this way.") If they have strong and competent software for products, (You don't need a comma here) they could save money by not paying a patent fee to another company,(change comma to a period to start a new sentence.) also(Also,) they are able to sell it to competitors as well.
It is time to think about sustainable growth. The company is still making a lot of profits but it won't be forever. Historically, many succesful companies vanished when they did not pay attention for(to) the future, when they hesitated changing their system and structure. We should learn from it.
Good job overall though!0 votedJuly 14, 20140
