Barney's diary

14.07.14 Barney's dairy

The day before yesterday, I hanged (hung) out (with) my cousin's friends by chance(This doesn't sound natural). At that moment, I found my ideal type's woman. I really wanted to talk with her, But I didn't catch any(get a) chance. And(Don't start a sentence with "and," you can say "also" here.) I thought She(this doesn't need to be capitalized, so just "she") already got(was) married because of  (she was wearing a)  ring. So, actually I (I was) disappointed.

Tonight, I heard good news. (Make the period a colon : ) She is single(.) and My cousin want(s) to find good guy who (to) introduce to her. I just shouted in my mind (,) "Hey sister!!!(In English we don't use titles like 오빠 or 누나..It would be really weird if you called an English girl "sister.") It's me~~ Why you can't (you) think (of) me next to you!!" But (don't start a sentence with "but." Instead use "However.") I can't say (it) for real :( Meanwhile, The subject is(was) changed before I knew it.

Anyway I'm supposed to come up with a plan to hang out with her.
But The problem is(,) It's(this doesn't need to be capitalized) not easy to(for) me to think of (a) way getting along (to hang out) with her. I don't know her's name,(or) address (and) so on. Actually(,) I don't have any information about her.
I know, The(doesn't need to be capitalized) best way is just to ask for my cousin help. But(However,) I can't ask her. How can I meet her one more (time) except for her helping ? (without asking her for help.)



plz correct wrong parts in my diary!

Good job!

Just ask her to get coffee with you :)