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    3. In the second, since I have recently been assigned to taking charge of the market because the colleague, whom I
    went on this business trip together with, would be assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland
    China) . 

    Should be rewritten to

    The business colleague whom I attended this trip with was assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland China.)This has recently led to me being assigned to taking over the market.

    John corrected the other mistakes.

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    July 13, 2014
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    Running

    Running is so so so tiring, but I like running. Running would will make me fit, I wanna want to be more fit. Today was is sunny, and I can see a big moon in the sky , wow it is so beautiful, you can get out and see it , if it is night-time there.

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    July 13, 2014
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    A little diary entry.

    I‘m learning musical software recently.For example like Sonar,the a studio to makeing songs,it can compose,edit and has many other functions to use.
    Composing a song is very interesting and fun,especially if you are a music lover.You can compose your own song,or just a melody.
    I need to put work hard to learn how to compose a song and how to use software to edit and choose the instruments. There are thousands of instruments and timbre for you to choose,how to combine them and how to make them sound good those are is music theory knowledge. You must then know then just that you can compose a song.Every steps are is important,that is a the key to complete a beautiful song.
    However,I think I have too many things to learn,including my English.

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    June 25, 2014
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