Are these sentences correct?? (My first business trip to China 2)
1. There were 2 reasons to visit Hong Kong.
2. First, we had to learn the current sales’ conditions of our products in Hong Kong market, and at the same time,
we wanted to know a sales forecast of our products in the market.
3. In the second, since I have recently been assigned to taking charge of the market because the colleague, whom I
went on this business trip together with, would be assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland
China) .
4. He used to dealing with Hong Kong market. I will take over his job. I had to know these distributors which he has
dealt with. So I visited Hong Kong to say “Hi!” to those agents face to face.
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3. In the second, since I have recently been assigned to taking charge of the market because the colleague, whom I
went on this business trip together with, would be assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland
China) .
Should be rewritten to
The business colleague whom I attended this trip with was assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland China.)This has recently led to me being assigned to taking over the market.
John corrected the other mistakes.
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Are these sentences correct?? (My first business trip to China 2)
1. There were 2 reasons to visit Hong Kong.
2. First, we had to learn the current sales’ conditions of our products in the Hong Kong market, and at the same time,
we wanted to know a the sales forecast of our products in the market.
3. In the second (I'm not sure what this means), since I have recently been assigned to taking charge of the market because the colleague, whom I
went on this business trip together with, would be assigned to a subsidiary in Kunshan (near Shanghai, mainland
China) .
4. He is used to dealing with the Hong Kong market. I will take over his job. I had to know these distributors which he has
dealt with. So I visited Hong Kong to say “Hi!” to those agents face to face.
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Thank you for your correction and comments, questions.
As for NO.4, what I wanted to say is "My colleague has dealt with Hong Kong market for a long time. However my company decided to station him in Kunshan (near Shang Hai). Which means he
won't deal with the Hong Kong market anymore. Instead of him, I will deal with the market. That's why I need to know about the market and the distributors."
I hope this helps you to understand the below sentences.
If you have any further questions, please contact me :)
Regards
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Very well done! However I was unsure about what you were trying to say at the start of sentence 3. Also I wasn't sure about sentence 4. did you mean he dealt with Hong Kong in the past or he is experienced with dealing with the market?
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