My comic book

Every day I'm working on my comic.

I have a story about one person who follows people on the subway, and one day, the police police captured him.
The police officer has some questions for this person (he is a man) and these are the questions:
(I would write here: The police officer asks him some questions:)

- What (why?) are you here? (Maybe: what are you doing here? Or why are you here?)

Some people accuse me, they say I´m a thief. (I would write: some people accuse me of being a tief)

- Will you follow people again? 

Yes, I just wanna talk with people on the subway, every morning I can see that people need to talk to someone.

-So, people just talk with you?

Yes, I ask them for time (what time is it), and after that the conversation continues.




Well is just the beginning of my idea. Thanks for reading!

I have just signed in for italki, and this is the first post that i helped with :) I think the story has potential! Will be waiting for more.

 All the best.