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Making up my mind to deepen my knowledge, I left GZTV ,which I had worked for 1year since my graduation,and searched for opportunities for self-improvement. Considering good English capacity is the key to study in a better platform, I have joined in an English course at University of Westminster since September 2013. I am deeply touched by the diversified culture of London. Living here, I get the opportunity of interacting with people from different background, races, religions and professionals. To my surprise, I realize that I have become a communication channel for people who want to know more about China and Chinese language. Exchanging language is also a process of exchanging culture. In six months, I improve my English ability and my adaptation to different culture. I hope to continue language exchange in this online way,and keep improving my English.
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    Hope the native speakers and professional teachers give me some advices.

    Here is an essay of my student,whom Im helping with her IELTS preparation.Ive already corrected some mistakes,with "()".Hope the native speakers and professional teachers give me some advices.


    In this age of change,there are many successful aports professhionals becoming celebrities and stars in our country(all around the world.I just feel it weird to say our country?).They can earn a pack of ( large amounts of )money and they can live very extravagant in living with huge houses and fancy cars(can live a extravagant life style,such as living in huge houses and driving fancy cars).As a result,more and more young people decide to become a athlete and want to be successful in sport to earn more money(get rich).However,some people think that it is reasonable that people (who are)successful in sport can earn much (more) money than the people in other professions while others think it is unfair.In this essay ,I will dicuss both views about
    this issue.

    To begin with,the successful professional athletes represent the image of their own country(countries),which means they are under high pressure from the media and they do not have individual privacy,as their act will be exposed to the public.Besides,their success can bring the honor to their country(counrties). In addition,becoming professional in sport needs a lot of time to train(do training).So (Thus,)almost their whole youth is dedicated to training.In other words,they must give up the time of entertainment.Overall,it is justified that they can earn a great deal of more money than the other professionals.

    On the other hand,some( other )people believe that the professionals in( some )other important fields deserve to earn more money (more wages(I think she says ‘earn money’ too many times) )than in athletes.Because the people in some important professions,such as scientists and surgeous,(who)can improve the development of biotechnology which can protect the environment,in the meanwhile,surgeons can cure people’s disease(sick people)and (even)save one’s life(their lives).

    To sum up,I would like to say that sports professionals deserve to earn a great deal of money (gain great wealth,(too many ‘earn money’and ‘a great deal of’)),(but) at the same time ,people should pay more attention to other more crucial professions.

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    June 3, 2014
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    Hope the native speakers and professional teachers give me some advices. Here is an essay of my student,whom Im helping with her IELTS preparation.Ive already corrected some mistakes,with "()".Hope the native speakers and professional teachers give me some advices. In this age of change,there are many successful aports professhionals becoming celebrities and stars in our country(all around the world.I just feel it weird to say our country?).They can earn a pack of ( large amounts of )money and they can live very extravagant in living with huge houses and fancy cars(can live a extravagant life style,such as living in huge houses and driving fancy cars).As a result,more and more young people decide to become a athlete and want to be successful in sport to earn more money(get rich).However,some people think that it is reasonable that people (who are)successful in sport can earn much (more) money than the people in other professions while others think it is unfair.In this essay ,I will dicuss both views about this issue. To begin with,the successful professional athletes represent the image of their own country(countries),which means they are under high pressure from the media and they do not have individual privacy,as their act will be exposed to the public.Besides,their success can bring the honor to their country(counrties). In addition,becoming professional in sport needs a lot of time to train(do training).So (Thus,)almost their whole youth is dedicated to training.In other words,they must give up the time of entertainment.Overall,it is justified that they can earn a great deal of more money than the other professionals. On the other hand,some other people believe that the professionals in some other important fields deserve to earn more money (more wages(I think she says ‘earn money’ too many times) )than in athletes.Because the people in some important professions,such as scientists and surgeous,(who)can improve the development of biotechnology which can protect the environment,in the meanwhile,surgeons can cure people’s disease(sick people)and (even)save one’s life(their lives). To sum up,I would like to say that sports professionals deserve to earn a great deal of money (gain great wealth,(too many ‘earn money’and ‘a great deal of’)),(but) at the same time ,people should pay more attention to other more crucial professions.
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    五味雜陳

    呢排系網絡上買咗一件波衫,作為一個偽球迷,終於在支持咗一支球隊好耐之後,買咗第一件波衫,但係件衫到咗屋企之後,被老豆話哩件衫唔值哩個價錢,真系塞晒D錢。好無奈噶。算吧啦,其實自己鐘意就得了。

    尋日睇完 m club大結局,突然有D感觸。發覺自己真系有D失敗,身邊老友冇幾多,只得一兩個。好羨慕劇中D女仔有咁多嘅老友,幾多年都未變過。感覺自己處理人際關係嘅方式同埋性格有點似劇中嘅丹丹,口硬心軟哉。

    我到宜家都唔明,系人嘅底線面前遺失友情,定系系友情面前放棄原則,感情同埋底線,究竟邊樣先系最重要?可能系友情面前,冇邊個系啱定系唔啱,可能只得一個原因,就系佢哋已經唔適合還埋一起,需要各自向前move on。

    睇咗哩點劇集,我發覺我越來越心水個D“舊舊的”嘅粵語歌,無論系Danny仔,定系譚校長。 話畀你知,哩首Danny仔概戀愛預告,我已經循環咗幾十遍

     

    PS:哈哈,我都有睇呢部劇,勾起了好多回憶,發覺要好好珍惜現在身邊的朋友,也突然有去找回以前好耐無聯繫的朋友的衝動。Danny仔,譚校長嘅歌都勾起了我爸媽拍拖時嘅回憶。

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    北京和西雅图

    温佳佳和Frank成为了朋友。Frank离婚了。他和前妻有一个女儿,名字叫做Julie。Julie不真的喜欢温佳佳,因为她想要她的爸爸妈妈在一起。有一次温佳佳(不太懂事的女人)带Julie去纽约。Frank正在纽约考美国医生试。Julie写HELP在她手上,给警察看看。Frank和温佳佳都向警察撒谎说她们一堆人是一对情侣。警察相信了。她们离开警察局后,Frank对温佳佳感到很生气。佳佳想要去住酒店,但是她的信用卡没干了无法使用。她不得不跟Frank和她女儿在便宜的宾馆住。

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    June 3, 2014
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    大家好!

    大家好。我叫Oxana,我的中文名字是夏娜。我今年25岁,现在住在上海。两年前我来到中国工作。我是舞蹈家 or 舞蹈演员 or 舞者(dancer - how to say?). 可是以前我不想学习汉语,我觉得这很难。这个今年2月我到泰国休息度假。可是什么都不顺利。2月14号我摩托车上摔了下来(from motobike)摔了。所以现在我不可以跳舞。2月24号,我开始在大学学习汉语。现在,我觉得中文又难又有意思。

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    June 3, 2014
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    Introduction

    你好。 我的名字是Douglas。 我是二十伞三岁。 我喜欢中国和中汉语。

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    June 3, 2014
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    我想提高我嘅廣東話,我可以幫你學英文。its traditional writing.

    If you want to communicate with Hongkong or Taiwan people ,you can write Chinese traditional.

     

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    May 29, 2014
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    21 Grams loss 灵魂出窍 告别人世 归零 漆黑 ps.what do mean 一两次,or you wanted to say 一两字or 一两句话?
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    May 29, 2014
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    塞翁失马焉知非福 Its from a story about one man lost a horse but that gives him luck at the end.It means “Misfortune might be a blessing in disguise.”
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    May 29, 2014
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