我的家鄉

我的家鄉

各位朋友，大家好！ 我想正式介紹一下我在伊利諾州的家鄉，芝加哥。這(是）個很大的城市，位於伊利諾的北部。大約有兩百七十萬居民。他們主要從事製造，航運，零售，和酒店工作。大多數人（為了養家糊口）都忙著去上班為了養家糊口，因此並不老（总）是友好的。

芝加哥的社區分為有產者和無產者， 而且，他們的學校（也）反映這一事實。比如在有產者的高級中學中，學生們用的都是最好的設備和最新的學習材料，還有他們（還）有最好的老師。但是，在無產者的高級中學中，學生們用的都是破舊的設備和過時的學習材料。還有，比起教學，教師們更關心的是（他们的）安全。

不要誤解我的意思，芝加哥仍然是一個了不起的城市參觀。芝加哥沒有山清水秀但是和同紐約或洛杉磯一樣（有）很多名勝古跡。我喜歡我的家鄉。建議大家從國外有機會去那裡出訪（来这里旅游）。

Hello, everyone. I want to formally introduce my Illinois state, hometown, Chicago. This very big city located in Illinois, north part. About have 2.8 million residents. They primarily engaged in manufacturing, transport, retail, and hotel work. Most people busy going to work to feed families, thus not always very friendly.

Chicago communities divided into the haves and the have-nots, and their high schools mirror this fact. Example, in property owner community high schools, students have best facilities and latest learning materials. Also they have best teachers. But In non-property owner community high schools, students have shabby facilities and outdated learning materials. Also, compared with education, teachers are more concerned with safety.

Don’t misunderstand my meaning. Chicago still is a great city to visit. Chicago doesn't have enchanting scenery but like New York or Los Angeles, the same very much historic sites. I love my hometown. I suggested everyone from abroad have chance go that place travel (on business or visit.)