Night, stars and...

Hi,
Yesterday I wrote “put the package on the table”, sorry, I want to say the baggage. The room was too small. If we had left it on the floor, we would have jumped over it to go around the bed. I’m going to tell you why it was on the table, better than under.

We had dinner within a circle of burning spirals to protect us from insects. The night was vibrant, and we stayed longer outside chatting, laughing and drinking some teas that our guide prepared in a ceremoniously way. Then the sky became dark. We couldn't see the stars not anymore. Suddenly a light flashed far away.   After that there was a loud, long noise announcing it was time to go bed. The storm was coming.
Then everything happened very quickly. Before entering in the room, I felt a drop on my arm. Just after closing the door I could head hear the rain hitting the sidewalk beside the building. I was frightened lying on the bed, thinking about the lightning conductor.  I knew that there was no one there, when I noticed the wet sheet. The rain was dropping in. The roof had more holes than the strainer used to make the tea.

To be continued

Thank you for reading and correcting

Children's Day and Dragon Boat Festival

Yesterday was Children's Day. I bought an ice cream machine for my daughter. She was very happy.
When I was a child, I really liked the Children's Day. On that day, my mother would bought new buy a new dress for me and took take me to the park.
And Today is Dragon Boat Festival, also called Double Fifth Festival. It's one of the most important Chinese festivals. The festival is to commemorate Qu Yuan. Today we will eat rice dumplings, watch dragon boat racing, touch off the set off firecrackers and wash the wormwood.
Happy Dragon Boat Festival!

<em>(I don't know what "wash the wormwood" is).</em>   

morning

These days I wake up at 4 o'clock in the morning so I can work or study for 2 hours until 6 o'clock.
The air is fresh and it is not yet hot in the morning.
I am very tired and sleepy after getting home from my work every day.
If I worked or study studied at night, it is not would not be effective, so I usually go to bed at 10:00.
I recommend you to wake up early in the morning.  

<em>Note:  In this case, "every day" should be two words.   Saying "every day" has the same meaning as "each day".     You use one word "everyday" when used as an adjective to describe something, such as "everyday" dishes, as opposed to fine china.</em>

Computer games are very bad for people and they cause a lot of problems

First of all, I want to point out that it's an FCE essay. So the theme was given and I don't want to raise any discussion here, just check it for any mistakes and collocations, thanks

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The increasing popularity of the Internet and computers makes compuret computer games popular as well. But while the morden modern technology does have benefits for us, is it also true for computer games?
On the positive side, it's believed that some games help ypubto you improve your logical thinking and fast reaction. Also, some researchers claim that online games can help people to overcome their shyness.
On the negative side, playing games takes up too much time, which could be spend spent more effictively. Moreover, your eyesight may get worse. Finally, playing games without a break for a long time, you can cause you to lose the your sense of reality.
On balance In summary, computer games aren't completely bad. It's They are an enjoyable pastime but you should do it  should be done in moderation.

Night and stars

Hi,
It´s my second day and I’m just thinking about holidays. It doesn’t mean I want to leave Italki. The thing is that today I woke up remembering a strange night dream where I lived in the middle of the nothing, felling feeling the strong power of the nature. I was in Sub-Saharan Africa resting of from my stressing stressful working live work life. It was my first time out of Europe. We have had been driving all the day by over dusty trials trails. Before sunset we got accommodations in the only place you could find it in the surrounding area. A row of rooms rised rose up from the ground as a miracle. All of them have had its own door and window. Indoor Inside there was one bed for two people and one table to put the a package on. Outdoors the night overfull was full of sparkling stars.
Tomorrow I´ll tell you what happened.

<em>Very interesting :)</em>

How should be shosen to choose a ripe, sweet watermelon?

Already Very soon watermelons will appear on the counters of shops . However you must follow some rules that to buy a good watermelon.  Any ripe watermelon makes an echoing sound if you have lightly tapped on it him.  Also a ripe watermelon is covered with a thick, shiny rind shining ,shell . You must carefully examine the watermelon if there is to look for a rotten place with a dot in the center of him it. It is better do not not to buy such watermelon. You should must not bought buy the watermelon already cut into on the counter and adsorbed which has absorbed all the chemical substances from that the air.

<em>Good job.  At the end of a sentence, put a period directly after the word, then put a space before the next sentence.   The skin of a watermelon is usually referred to as the rind.  A watermelon is an object so use "</em>it<em>" to refer to it (not "</em>him<em>" or "</em>her<em>").</em>