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Night, stars and... Hi, Yesterday I wrote “put the package on the table”, sorry, I want to say the baggage. The room was too small. If we had left it on the floor, we would have jumped over it to go around the bed. I’m going to tell you why it was on the table, better than under. We had dinner into a circle of burning spirals to protect us from insects. The night was vibrant, and we stayed longer outside chatting, laughing and drinking some teas that our guide prepared in a ceremoniously way. The sky became dark. We couldn´t see the stars, not anymore. Suddenly a light flashed far away, after that, and strong and lazy noise (it took long time to sound) announced it was time to go bed. The storm was coming. Later everything happened very quickly. Before entering in the room, I felt a drop on my arm. Just after closing the door I could head the rain blowing the sidewalk beside the building. I was frightened lied on bed, thinking about lightning conductor, I knew that there was no one there, when I noticed the wet sheet. It was dropping in. The roof had more holes than the strainer used to the tea. To be continued Thank you for reading and correcting

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Night, stars and...

Hi,
Yesterday I wrote “put the package on the table”, sorry, I want to say the baggage. The room was too small. If we had left it on the floor, we would have jumped over it to go around the bed. I’m going to tell you why it was on the table, better than under.

We had dinner within a circle of burning spirals to protect us from insects. The night was vibrant, and we stayed longer outside chatting, laughing and drinking some teas that our guide prepared in a ceremoniously way. Then the sky became dark. We couldn't see the stars not anymore. Suddenly a light flashed far away.   After that there was a loud, long noise announcing it was time to go bed. The storm was coming.
Then everything happened very quickly. Before entering in the room, I felt a drop on my arm. Just after closing the door I could head hear the rain hitting the sidewalk beside the building. I was frightened lying on the bed, thinking about the lightning conductor.  I knew that there was no one there, when I noticed the wet sheet. The rain was dropping in. The roof had more holes than the strainer used to make the tea.

To be continued

Thank you for reading and correcting

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Night, Stars, And...

 

Hi,


Yesterday I wrote “put the package on the table”, and I want to say the baggage instead. The room was too small. If we had left the baggage on the floor, we would have to jump over it to go past the bed. I’m going to tell you why on the table was better than under.

We had dinner with a circle of burning candles to protect us from insects. The night was vibrant, and we stayed outside chatting for a long time. Laughing while drinking some teas that our guide prepared in a ceremonious way. The sky became dark. We couldn´t see the stars, not anymore. Suddenly, a light flashed far away. After that, a strong and lengthy noise. This meant it was time to go bed. The storm was coming.


Everything happened very quickly. Entering in the room, I felt a drop on my arm. Just after closing the door I could hear the rain hitting the sidewalk beside the building. I was frightened and lied on bed, thinking about the lightning. I knew that there was no one there, when I noticed the wet sheet. The rain was falling in. The roof had more holes than the strainer used to the tea.

To be continued...

Thank you for reading and correcting. 

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