Mistakes for "You make me fell as at home"

Please, point out which mistakes are present in these sentences, or give me some suggestions.

You make me fell as at home
You made me fell as at home
You have made me fell as at home

Do you know other ways to express gratitude to person very hospitable?

Thanks in advance,
Regards,
Lara

I believe we would say, "You have made me feel at home". Simply like that. It conveys an appreciation for kind hospitality that allowed you to feel so comfortable it was as if you were in your own home. You could also say, "Thank you for your kind hospitality!" "I felt so comfortable in your home".

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He also weared wears a cool suit. In the coldest winter he was nearly naked. (the images of a cool suit and 'nearly naked' seem to conflict here. Do you mean to say a cool 'outfit' which could leave him partly bare? The term 'suit' usually refers to the kind modern businessmen wear...with a tie and white shirt. Maybe he has a no shirt on and just kung fu pants? Or maybe he is modern looking with a sleak black suit and tie?) He carried a long, black, cool sword. Of course his sword was cool. I even could not can't even describe it.
One day, in a cool winter which the river ice inthe river was three inches thick. All the people stayed home to avoid being frozzen stiff. to be a stick. That day the cool swordsman appeared in the street with his cool appearance. Marvelous!

He opened his mouth and start to speak. "I am cool", he said.

People had never heared his voice. Everyone wanted to hear his voice and did not care about the weather.

"I am cool", the swordsman repeated again.

"Of course you are cool. Everyone knows you are the cool swordsman" the people answered him.

"I am really cool", the swordsman said again.

"Maybe he needs a quite should be quiet", said an old man from downtown who had never heard of the cool swordsman said.

"You are joking", everyone shouted and laught laughed at the old man.

Suddenly the people saw noticed that the swordsman was had fallen down in a cool style.

"What happened?" the people asked and took him to a doctor.

"He is dead. He is cool," the doctor said.

"Of course. We know." the people replied, "but why did he dead die?"

I....I.....means his "He was too cool cold and got a heavy bad flu."

From then on the people told this story to their children to forrbidden warn them about being too cool.

Fun story! I like it. I agree it is important we teach our children about the danger of 'trying to be too cool'...hahaha! Still I love to watch those super cool guys in the martial arts movies! Finally something usually makes them let their feelings out...falling in love, the tender love of a little orphan child or maybe finally facing some hidden pain because of a crisis. Sometimes though, they will just drop dead from the flu...hahaha!

A cool story!

A cool story
Not very long ago, there was a swordsman. His appearance was cool. You certainly didn't know that how cool he was. (This confused me a bit. If his appearance was cool, how come you wouldn't know (how) cool he was? Do you mean to say...he looks cool but you still don't how 'extra' cool he was...?)
Cool crowd permeated his whole body from the head to the feet toe. His hair was colored white like the coolest snow. His eyes? no You could not see them clearly. They were always half open and half closed because the swordsman trusted deeply believed that a cool man should hide his feelings.Through Still, in his half closed. his eyes, what could not be hidden was the slipping cold night which could where hid the capacity to kill one hundred and sixty five people in one second.

He had a hook nose which was crowded with in a cloud of cool steam. The steam hided faded and appeared with his breathing. People never heared to No one ever heard his voice. A cool man needn't speak. ,right? 

Smile? Buddy, please respect a cool man. He would like to rather be dead rather than to smile. Smiling will would damage all his the cool profermance what was persona built in past.

Maybe you still did not understand this still doesn't explain how cool he was. Ok. In one word, Here's how cool he is. (remember there must be a space between each word and between the end of a sentence and the beginning of the next one, not counting the comma or period.) the People from south  hottest Africa need not a no air conditioner on the hottest day if stay they are with him. In another a word,(this isn't really how we use the phrase 'in a word'. Notice you are using many words. Maybe say ..'another way to say it is'...or better, say nothing at all. Just let the image speak for itself.) The hottest American slender golden hair girl turns to be a ice cream in one second if close to the cool swordsman.

10th, May

A femal girl/woman said I was a naive people person,  that I said whatever I want, but no without meaning to harm people. There was no pressure desire to be a friends with me. I was not happy about that. It made me realize that I was lucky that I haven't been killed by a villain. That friend seems to like women. It made me scared of that too. Ahhhh, I am not that type.
So I usually say little at the usual time, because I know that what I said say always makes them feel them funny (not the humorous way).
They will think 'how could she say that without brain brainless thing'. Ahhh
Anyway, I am enjoy being alone. I always find things to do.

Another World

I often think of the monks or nuns. They choose to live their lives separated from the outside world. I don't know if they are happy with their lives, but they are not forced to choose that lives life. At least they prefer this kind of life than over other life styles.

What does that mean to me? It means that people can live in another world. Some particular kind of lives life can exceed go beyond the times, history, countries and many human desires. (Maybe...) Realizing this, enlighteneds me.

Of course, I don't want to be separated from this world, but my soul can live in another world from time to time to enjoy the life that includes anything and exceeds goes beyond anything at the same time.
My real world is not bad. My (or 'this') another world is better. Entering into a this 'better world' can help me to make my real world better improve my 'real world'. That is real important.

I enjoyed this. It sounds like you might be talking about a retreat in a monastery. I llve in another version of 'the real world' - in Mexico. I also love to spend time in retreat and it helps me to enjoy this 'real world' which can sometimes present challenges and not look so fun at a given moment.  I love to go to silent meditation retreats once in a while and I emerge refreshed and happy! It sounded boring to me before I tried it...but it turns out that it made me feel so good! Thank you for writing this.

Interesting discussion. I notice that there often is an assupmtion that the question of non-monogamy is assumed to apply to men and not in the reverse. I'll answer considering it going both ways - since we are talking about two parters involved in a relationship. We all love, feel attractions, are capable of faithfulness and passion. We all make mistakes too. No one should enjoy rights not shared by the other.

Powerful energy..physical, emotional and social carries through sex. It can be destructive and it can be sublime, nurturing and bonding of all the best things. I also think people are different...in culture, temperament and even in hormonal drives. So there has to be room for variance in a range. That range should not include abuse and should consider the full experience of all - not just one side. Most important is what helps us avoid the destructive end of the continuem and what ones promotes the sublime, happy end. Nothing is perfect and pain in love cannot be totally avoided (unrequited love for ex). But it is dangerous when emotions bond through sexual intimacy and then an action causes betrayal or abandonment of the intimate bond. This can hurt people in a profound way, extending to children and communities. 

That's why monogamy is generally a better model for stability and happiness. It will never be possible to have that work out without variance. We are too subject to attractions, unknowing about ourselves in general, acting on impulse and lacking wisdom for choosing partners. Second choice is to try to be caring and respectful of all involved...really trying to protect the feelings of the beloved) We should remember that love is an action not just a feeling and an impulse. The action is motivated by wanting best welfare for the beloved...not gratifying cravings. We have to love ourselves first, then can learn to love others. Nothing is more important.