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He also weared wears a cool suit. In the coldest winter he was nearly naked. (the images of a cool suit and 'nearly naked' seem to conflict here. Do you mean to say a cool 'outfit' which could leave him partly bare? The term 'suit' usually refers to the kind modern businessmen wear...with a tie and white shirt. Maybe he has a no shirt on and just kung fu pants? Or maybe he is modern looking with a sleak black suit and tie?) He carried a long, black, cool sword. Of course his sword was cool. I even could not can't even describe it.
One day, in a cool winter which the river ice inthe river was three inches thick. All the people stayed home to avoid being frozzen stiff. to be a stick. That day the cool swordsman appeared in the street with his cool appearance. Marvelous!

He opened his mouth and start to speak. "I am cool", he said.

People had never heared his voice. Everyone wanted to hear his voice and did not care about the weather.

"I am cool", the swordsman repeated again.

"Of course you are cool. Everyone knows you are the cool swordsman" the people answered him.

"I am really cool", the swordsman said again.

"Maybe he needs a quite should be quiet", said an old man from downtown who had never heard of the cool swordsman said.

"You are joking", everyone shouted and laught laughed at the old man.

Suddenly the people saw noticed that the swordsman was had fallen down in a cool style.

"What happened?" the people asked and took him to a doctor.

"He is dead. He is cool," the doctor said.

"Of course. We know." the people replied, "but why did he dead die?"

I....I.....means his "He was too cool cold and got a heavy bad flu."

From then on the people told this story to their children to forrbidden warn them about being too cool.

Fun story! I like it. I agree it is important we teach our children about the danger of 'trying to be too cool'...hahaha! Still I love to watch those super cool guys in the martial arts movies! Finally something usually makes them let their feelings out...falling in love, the tender love of a little orphan child or maybe finally facing some hidden pain because of a crisis. Sometimes though, they will just drop dead from the flu...hahaha!

A cool story!

A cool story
Not very long ago, there was a swordsman. His appearance was cool. You certainly didn't know that how cool he was. (This confused me a bit. If his appearance was cool, how come you wouldn't know (how) cool he was? Do you mean to say...he looks cool but you still don't how 'extra' cool he was...?)
Cool crowd permeated his whole body from the head to the feet toe. His hair was colored white like the coolest snow. His eyes? no You could not see them clearly. They were always half open and half closed because the swordsman trusted deeply believed that a cool man should hide his feelings.Through Still, in his half closed. his eyes, what could not be hidden was the slipping cold night which could where hid the capacity to kill one hundred and sixty five people in one second.

He had a hook nose which was crowded with in a cloud of cool steam. The steam hided faded and appeared with his breathing. People never heared to No one ever heard his voice. A cool man needn't speak. ,right? 

Smile? Buddy, please respect a cool man. He would like to rather be dead rather than to smile. Smiling will would damage all his the cool profermance what was persona built in past.

Maybe you still did not understand this still doesn't explain how cool he was. Ok. In one word, Here's how cool he is. (remember there must be a space between each word and between the end of a sentence and the beginning of the next one, not counting the comma or period.) the People from south  hottest Africa need not a no air conditioner on the hottest day if stay they are with him. In another a word,(this isn't really how we use the phrase 'in a word'. Notice you are using many words. Maybe say ..'another way to say it is'...or better, say nothing at all. Just let the image speak for itself.) The hottest American slender golden hair girl turns to be a ice cream in one second if close to the cool swordsman.