The first post

So, I don't write well but I need to try because I have a big dream for my life.
I want to be a master, I want to be a teacher in a college and to teach psychology.

Although, I'm not the best student in the world, every day I try realize my dreams.

So, that's me...

Every person in this world is equal to every other person

All people are good, and worthy of respect. If we don't respect others then no one will respect us, either today or any other day. I think that no-one will learn anything from me unless I love all people, all races, all colors and, if I can do this, they will give me great respect. That is worth a gold medal to me.
Thanks

Could you please correct my essay? Now with spaces between paragraphs. ;) Thank you in advance

Some people say that the best way to improve health by increasin the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

At present, public health is a very serious issue that has become a priority for society and governments in general. Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. However, others are of the opinion that this would not have significant effects on public health and that other measures are required. This essay will discuss both points of view and I will give my own opinion on this matter at the end.

Advocates of the idea that sports facilities must be increased to improve health, might argue important reasons to support this. For example, it has been demonstrated that to do regular exercise has physical, psychological and social benefits in humans. It helps to prevent cardiovascular diseases and diabetes, and controls weight as well, which are major worries among the population. Furthermore, it is important to highlight that exercise liberates hormones such as endorphins and serotonin, that make us feel better. In addition, it is well known that sports is a good way to disconnect from our routine lives. Therefore, increasing the number of sport facilities would seem likely to improve public health. Firstly, the prices of sports centers and gyms should be cheaper and affordable for everyone. And secondly, government should invest more money into building more bike lanes and sports infrastructure.

On the other hand, the opponents to this idea argue that increasing sports facilities would have little effect on health and that other measures are required. I think they are partly right, because it is well known that exercising without following a healthy lifestyle is not worthwhile. Therefore, in order to increase public health, government should promote healthy habits such as eating healthy, quitting smoking, and the moderate use of alcohol. In fact, some countries are already promoting these good habits among citizens.

In my opinion, the best way to improve public health is to increase the number of sports facilities. However, I think that healthy habits must also be promoted.

Your point of view is valid for some older individuals, but not all. As a 65-year-old, I can tell you that it is possible to be old and stupid! Of course, one hopes to gain wisdom and experience with the years, and in some ways, particular to me, I have done so. I have also had the pleasure of knowing many intelligent, self-aware, thoughtful young people. So I think it is more important to consider the qualities of the individual you are talking to rather than their age, and then use your own good sense to evaluate their advice. Good luck!