Could you please correct my essay? Now with spaces between paragraphs. ;) Thank you in advance Some people say that the best way to improve health by increasin the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. At present, public health is a very serious issue that has become in one of the priority of society and governments in general. Thus, some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. However, others are of the opinion that this would not have significant effects on public health and that other measure are required. This essay will discuss both points of view and I will give my own opinion on this matter at the end. Advocates of the idea that sports facilities must be increased to improve health, might argue important reasons to support this. For example, has been demonstrated that to do exercise with regularly has physical, psychological and social benefits in humans. For example, it helps to prevent cardiovascular diseases, diabetes and control overweight as well, which are major worries among the population. Furthermore, it is important to highlight that when we do exercise liberate good hormones such as endorphins and serotonin, that make us feel better. In addition, it is well known that sports is a good way to disconnect from our routine lives. Consequently, it is necessary to increase the sport facilities in order to improve the public health. Firstly, the prices of sports centers and gyms might be cheaper and affordable for everyone. And secondly, government should invest more money in to building more bike lanes and sports infrastructures. On the other hand, the opponents to this idea argue that increasing sports facilities would have little effects on health and other measures are required. I think they are in part right, because it is well known that do exercise without following a healthy lifestyle is not worthwhile. Therefore, in order to increase the public health government could promote healthy habits such as, eating healthy, quit to smoke or don't abuse of alcohol, for example. In fact, some countries are already promoting these good habits among society. In my opinion, I totally agree that the best way to improve the public health is by increasing the sports facilities. However, I think that healthy habits must be promoted besides the increase of sports facilities for the improvement of public health.