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- Mother Goose I have heard about Mother Goose long time before, from the novel "And Then There Were None", written by Agatha Christie. At that time, I just felt the poem is a little wired as a nursery rhyme, without any further thinking. Today, someone mentioned that "Who Killed Cock Robin" and "London Bridge is Falling Down" are also in the same book, and that made me become curious about the book. I picked up some poems randomly. And….I was shocked. The poem that surprised me most is the one called "Lizzie Borden Took an Axe". Its content is as follows: “Lizzie Borden took an axe, and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one.” A nursery rhyme, which is written for children, tells a story of a murder! The poems remind me of a TV series called Horrible History, made by cbbc. It is an excellent comedy. It tells the stories that really happened in the history. It has stories like the miserable life of Victorian children, Henry VIII and his six wives. While it also has others like the Celts used to decorate their fence with heads of enemies, the ancient Egyptian would remove entrails of the corpse before making mummy. These kind of stories seldom appear in Chinese TV dramas, even if the audience are adults. Most stories for children always shows the bright side of the world. Others are designed so that children can learn something from it. The ugly duckling will always become a swan and the prince and the princess will always live happily ever after. Some people say the reason is the different attitudes toward death. Chinese regard death as an ominous thing, and will avoid talking about it if possible. It is a bit like Escapism. While western people will face the death directly even in their childhood. No wonder why criminal TV series of America and British have so many “horrible” senses (at least for me). And I have heard that our neighbor, Japanese people have some “horrible” nursery rhymes, too. So maybe our Chinese way is the minority. But I still cannot understand why children should be taught about such a serious topic so early. Or maybe I will when I become a parent.May 3, 201410
- I looked up the word in a online dictionary and it says "fixer-upper" is "待修缮的房子". But according to your example "fixer-upper" can also be used to describe cars, so I think this translation is not very well. If you need a nouns, you could use "破烂(儿)"( similar to the word "junk") You could also use adjectives, like "破旧(similar to "dilapidated")", or "破" in spoken Chinese. For example, 破烂儿:这辆旧车就是个破烂儿,修都没法修。 破旧:这所老房子已经相当破旧了。 破:这车太破了,真该修修了!0 votedMay 3, 20140
- Though my English is not that good, I will try my best to explain it for you. 乌鸦嘴 is a nouns. You can say "你这个乌鸦嘴。" or "他是个乌鸦嘴。". 乌鸦嘴是个名词, 用来形容一个人对好事的预测从来不说准,对坏事的预测却一说就准。 for example: --你别看现在天气这么好,说不定下午就下雨了呢 (Indeed the weather is very good now, but maybe it will rain this afternoon. Who knows?) (然后真的,非常出乎意料地,下雨了)(And it began to rain, unexpectedly) --你这个乌鸦嘴。(都因为是你乱说话才导致真的下雨了) (Because you said it could rain and it is really raining now! It is your words that brought the bad luck.) --我觉得他们肯定赢!(I believe they will definitely win!!!) --呵呵,谁都知道你是个乌鸦嘴,你这么一说他们肯定会输了。 (Well, as everyone knows your prediction never came true in the past. So I think they will lose the game, according to you.) --虽然我很自信我能赢,但是也说不定会输呢。 (Though I am confident that I will be the winner, it is possible that I may lose.) --不要乌鸦嘴。(不要说不吉利的话) (Don't say that. It may bring you a bad luck and become true!) (Actually, "乌鸦嘴" is used as a verb here. But this kind of usage is informal.)0 votedMay 2, 20141
- “大英博物馆后面的小旅馆,”他愤怒地写道:“愿意租房给中国人,不是因为他们有多么的好心,而是因为他们想发家致富得依靠这些东方人。为了攫取最大的利益,他们才不得不与这些黄脸怪物打交道。 有的地方没有直接按原文,而是意译了一下。 我觉得作者好像是想说:”那些小旅馆只是为了钱才招待他们,其实内心是看不起中国人的“。不知道我理解的对不对。。。。 (其实原文好难懂啊T.T) 提醒两点: 1. British Museum的中文译名是“英国国家博物馆”,一般称作“大英博物馆”。 2. 直接引语(直接引用别人的话)标点是有一定格式的。如: 他说:“XXXXX。”(注意冒号) “XXXX,”他说:“XXXXX。”(注意前一句的逗号,和后一句之前的冒号) “XXXX。”他说。(两个句号,没有冒号) (这是我小学学的,不知道现在是不是还这么用,仅供参考!!!)0 votedMay 2, 20145
- 你 是 中学生还是大 学 生? >>我是硕士研究生( I'm pursuing a master degree. Is that okay?) 你 跟你的 朋友们花时间怎么 样? >>一起看书学习,或者一起吃饭聊天 你 们常常去 酒吧马? >>我没去过酒吧。 >>我觉得中国学生一般不去酒吧,通常是找个餐馆一边吃饭一边聊天。 你认为百分之几的你们的同学有女/男朋友? >>大学时,大约一半的同学有男/女朋友 >>就中国大陆来说,我们不鼓励中学生交男/女朋友,因为他们的学习压力很大。 你喜欢听什么音乐吗? >>我个人喜欢听中国的古典音乐和西方的古典音乐(classical music) 你喜欢看什么电影吗? >>我喜欢看Pixar和Dreamworks的动画电影 你想美国的时候,你想什么? >>American dream,文化多元,经济发达0 votedApril 28, 20140
英国的饮食文化
我刚刚看了我最喜欢的中文节目,《舌尖上的中国》。这个节目给了我写今天的短文的灵感。
八十年代的时候,英国以质量低,花样不多,很难吃的菜肴而出名。现在这个情况完全改变了,现在很多人认为伦敦是欧洲的烹饪首都。<em>“英国以质量低,花样不多,很难吃的菜肴而出名” 可以改成“英国菜肴以其质量低、花样少、味道难吃而出名。”</em>
传统的英国菜肴以土豆为主。在一个英国人的眼里,土豆能搭配任何东西。而且英国人会用各种各样的做法来做土豆:煮,蒸,炸,炖,等等。英国人也喜欢吃红肉,特别是牛肉和羊肉。炸鱼薯条是最典型的英国菜。传统上来说,英国人每一个星期五晚上都会吃炸鱼薯条。而星期天中午饭的时候英国人会吃 “Sunday Roast”。 Sunday Roast由烤牛肉(上面浇肉汁),以及蒸(或者煮)的蔬菜(比如说土豆、胡萝卜、西兰花)构成。英国以甜点而著称。英国的甜点的种类很丰富。如果你来到一所英国餐馆的话,你会有机会吃到各种各样好吃的蛋糕和饼干。我在这里没有足够的篇幅描写英国的甜点,因为种类真的五花八门。朋友们,如果你们喜欢英国的甜点的话,我给你们推荐一个非常受欢迎的电视节目叫做《Great British Bake Off》。我觉得这个节目真的是英国饮食文化的缩影。<em>从我个人的语感上来讲,“著名”一般做前置定语,想放后面的话可以用“以……而著称”。</em>
我上面所说的菜是英国最典型的菜。但是现在英国的饮食文化变化了很多。伦敦有各种各样,来自世界各地的餐馆,包括很多中国餐馆。其实一个最近进行的一个调查表明,英国人最喜欢吃的不是英国最传统,最典型的菜肴,而是英国人最喜欢吃的是印度咖喱。《舌尖上的中国2》第一集讲的是人和菜的迁徙,我觉得英国就是一个例子。因为英国是一个多元文化的国家,英国的饮食文化受到了世界各地的影响。比如说,这几十年来很多印度人移民到了英国,引进了他们美味的印度咖喱。<em>“而是英国人最喜欢吃的是印度咖喱”中,“而是”和“英国人最喜欢吃的是”保留哪一个都行。</em>
<em>从我个人的语感上来讲,“如上所述”后面一般不接其他内容,比如:“问题如上所述”;“情况如上所述”</em>
在英国,烹饪特别受欢迎。而且比起自己动手,英国人更喜欢看别人做饭。英国国家电视台(BBC)每天都播出烹饪节目。最著名的节目之一是《Masterchef》。在这个节目里,一群业余的烹饪爱好者相互比拼并争夺奖杯。虽然这个节目的来源是英国的BBC电视台,但是现在这个节目也在很多国家播出的。在中国这个节目叫做《顶级厨师》。英国和中国的版本的差别很明显,而且可以从这些差别中看出英国和中国的文化差异。但是这是下个星期的作文的题材!<em>从我个人的语感上来讲,用“指出”时一般不省略主语(发出动作的人),比如“他指出了其中的问题”。</em>
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你写的真的很好!!!
我改的地方大部分都是很小的错误,改不改其实都可以的。可能需要注意的问题有两个:
1.主语重复:如果两个分句的内容连贯,主语相同,后面一句的主语可以适当省略;
2.断句:和英文一样,一个句子太长的话,理解起来也比较困难。可以用逗号隔开,句子结构会比较清晰(英文的从句之间有时也会加逗号的,对吧?:D)。
我也很喜欢看关于饮食的节目。即使吃不到,也可以饱一饱眼福嘛~《舌尖上的中国》真的很赞,在中国国内也非常受欢迎!
你介绍的英国的饮食文化我也很有兴趣。很期待你的下一篇文章!
0 votedApril 28, 20140大家好
大家好。我在学习中文,想交中国朋友。我有QQ,可是我不喜欢视频和语音聊天,我喜欢用文字聊天。
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I don't really know what do you mean by "打电话".
As far as I know, QQ cannot call moblies directly.
If you mean "video and voice calls", I suggest to use "视频和语音聊天".
video calls = 视频聊天; Or just use 视频;
voice calls = 语音聊天; Or use 语聊 or 语音;
I think you have clearly expressed your idea. Good job.
0 votedApril 27, 20140
