Some English sentences to practice

I am capable trying to practice some English sentences written in different ways, such as 1º conditional, 2º conditional and 3errd conditional:

1-If I study English a lot, English I will learn it quickly.

2-If I had a ship I would/could travel by the sea. (would means you <em>will</em> do something, could means you <em>can,</em> do something).

3- If I had written a book, I would have been very famous.

For Examples of another types of sentences that I usually made mistakes with. Please, could you correct my mistakes???

He says (that or not that) the another day he was drunk.  He says that the other day he was not drunk.

I am going to talk about (that or not that) going on holidays. I am going to talk about not going on holidays.

He was writing an article called living in clouds when something happensed suddenly. (the 'was' makes this past tense)

I would like to tell you (that or not that) I am 20. I would like to tell you that I am not 20. 

When I saw you, I thought you were older than me.

Look at that! Hhave you seen that?  Look at that. Have you seen that?

Thinking of that, I need to have a solution soon. 

Please could you help me with these sentences???...sometimes I don't understand If I write properly or if I need to use more the punctuation. Correct everything, also including these explanations.

Really, thanks so much.

Well done! You seem to understand the concept of what to do. Keep working at it, you're almost there.  

Interview job, help whith this answer please, thank you.

What do you know about our company spca?
spca and rspca is different, spcaas an animal welfare charity, do not recieve gobermment funding and rspca yes, rspca is on england and gales.
spca have 11 centers in uk.
spca does not put healthy animals to sleep, recue all animals example dogs, cats,rabbits,small pets, birds, exotics, ferrets, equines, and farm animals
On 2013 it were named scottish charity of the year.

Interview job, please help me with these answers, thank you.

What do you know about our Company, the SPCA?

The SPCA and RSPCA are different.  The SPCA is an animal welfare charity that does not recieve government funding, nor does the RSPCA (in the UK).  The RSPCA is in England and Wales. 

The SPCA has 11 centres in the UK.

The SPCA does not put healthy animals to sleep, it rescues all animals, for example; dogs, cats, rabbits, small pets, birds, exotics, ferrets, equines, and farm animals. 

In 2013 it was named the Scottish Charity of the year. 

Well done! Just watch the plural, add 'the' to the beginning of a company name (usually) or country, and keep working on the tense - you did VERY well! 

Hi I'm new in Italki

Hi,
I'm learning English Language, and I would like finding English Language native who wants to learn Spanish Language. As we could correct each other.
I'm looking forward to beginning this experience.
Best Wishes.
Carmen.

Hi!  I'm new to Italki.

Hi,

I'm learning English, and I would like to find a native English speaker who wants to learn Spanish, as we could correct each other.

I'm looking forward to beginning this experience.

Best Wishes.

Carmen.

Very well done Carmen!  You're English is very good and you communicate well!  Welcome to Italki!!

My dream is to speak english.

I'm interested in languages, technology and travel. I like to spend my free time with my wife and my daughter. I'm really/very (1) interested in english because I want a better life to for my family and I want a development work job (2). Actually/Currently I'm studying in the Universidad Politecnica del Valle de Mexico (3).

Very well done!  Your english is clear and you communicate well!

(1) really/very - either word can be used but 'very interested' is more professional sounding.

(2) You have the choice of saying 'I want a development job', or 'I want development work', but not 'I want a development work'. 

(3) Actually/Currently - either word works, but 'currently' is the better choice and it allows the sentence to remain the same.  If you do want to use 'actually' then it would sound better to add <em>what</em> you're studying for, as an example 'Actually I'm studying in the University for a Degree in Development Work'.  

(3) In English, titles are capitalized, so the university politecnica del valle de mexico becomes University Politecnica del Valle de Mexico.

Summon to meeting

Meeting request

Dear Mr./Mrs.

(To Whom It May Concern. Or, Dear Mr. Smith/Mrs. Smith, but a name should be written in this space). 

For intermediate of the present the regards cordially and once we invite their to meeting of work for the date 15/06/2014 an hour’s 09:00 a.m. we will see the follow diary.  

You are cordially invited to attend a business presentation on June 15, 2014, at 9:00 a.m., the agenda is:  
- Enroll to course of English.

- How to enroll in an English course./ - Enrolling in an English course. 
- Pendent homework of the course of English.

- Course work for learning English.
- Next tests, of the course of English

- English examinations (exams). 
- Introduce of the virtual community for learn English.

- Introduction to the virtual community for learning English. / - Introducing the on-line community for learning English. 
- Question and answers.

- Questions and answers.
We hope their punctual attendance.

We hope to see you here./ We hope to see you there. 

Regards

Regards, 

(The name of the person who is hosting the meeting)

Translation is:

Convocatoria a reunión
Estimados Srs.
Por intermedio de la presente los saludo cordialmente y a la vez los invito a la reunión de trabajo para el día 15/06/2014 a horas 09:00 a.m. se tratará la siguiente agenda:
- Ingresantes al curso de ingles
- Trabajos del curso de ingles
- Próximos exámenes del curso de ingles
- Presentación de la comunidad virtual para aprender ingles
- Preguntas y respuestas.
Esperamos su puntual asistencia.
Un cordial saludo

RONWELD - Well done!  My suggestions are not exact translations of your work, but I hope that I have translated your intent.  Again, well done!