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Le Dang
Vietnamese
Sep 11, 2014
Anh Adam rất rất chăm chỉ ;) Vậy nên em vừa gửi bài tập cho anh rồi ^^. Hẹn gặp anh lần sau!
Le Dang
Vietnamese
Jul 28, 2014
Anh Adam rất chăm học nên em rất vui ;)
Le Dang
Vietnamese
Jun 20, 2014
Anh Adam rất chăm chỉ ;). Bây giờ em sẽ chữa bài tập và gửi lại cho anh đây ^^
Le Dang
Vietnamese
Apr 29, 2014
Bài học quá dễ đối với anh Adam đúng không ạ ;-) ?
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    IF LIFE IS SO SHORT! SHORT.... I would use "..." instead of "!", because using the word if to start a sentence implies that there will be two parts to a sentence (eg. If I go, then I will be tired). This is called a conditional sentence, and you need to include the conditional second part. You can end it with ... to show the reader that you will answer this conditional phrase. So even though you don't show the second part, you allude to it. Does that make sense?

    Are you scared of death? I was, but after losing a close friend, I realized that I am not scared of death anymore. Life is so short. We never know what will happen tomorrow to us, to you. or to anyone else.Yesterday they our friend (I would identify who "they" are, to make it more clear. I am assuming it was your good friend.) were was still with us, smile, smiling  with us, but today they are gone. That's life!
    Do you know why I am not scared? of death? (To make the sentence more natural you don't have to write of death again, because it is already understood.) Because I don't think death is the end of everything. It's just the a new begining. After dying, I could be a wind, I could travel anywhere I want, even around the universe. I could watch my family from the clouds. I could whisper to them that I love them and they are always in my heart.
    But I know they would will never hear. So why do we have to wait until we die to tell them we love them? Why did I had have to wait until my friend died to tell him that I loved him?. And now, I always regret because I did not telling him that being his friendship is was one of the happiest things I've met experienced in my life.
    Don't let yourself be open to regrets after some one passed passes away. Let's start to tell them the important people in our lives, (Who are they?) that you we love them now! (You changed the perspective of the preceding sentence from "us" with let's to "you", you should keep it consistent.) Because life is so short!

     

    I really liked this journal, it was written with sincerity. It was also very easy to read and sounds like how a Canadian would express themselves. Keep up the good work! :)

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    June 1, 2014
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    Kỷ niệm em nào đềm nhất ơ Việt Nam. Kỷ niệm nào của anh là em đềm nhất ở Việt Nam? Anh chắc chắn khi tụi mình đã đi vịnh Ha Lọng năm trước. Sáu người bạn gặp ơ đó để cùng nghỉ ngơi và du lịch vui vẻ. Vô số núi tươi tốt nằm nước biển. Phong cảnh đep hơn cai bất cứ gì anh đã thấy. Chúng ta ăn hải sản khác nhau và uống bia. Sau đó đa số người đều chán một chút, chúng ta đi chạy lấy đà vào nươc biển ấm. Hôm đó chúng tôi vui chơi rất nhiều ở tầu.
    May 9, 2014
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    COFFEE IN DANANG (PART 3.1)

    This part is for A.E!
    Hi there! In the previous parts of Coffee in Danang, I told you about the different ways that people in Danang drink coffee. Today I would like to write about the different various ("Different" is not wrong, but you used that word in the preceding sentence. So I would use "various" instead.) kinds of Coffee Shops in there are here.
    There are some kind of Coffee Shops in Danang, (This sentence :) is unneeded) , for examples:
    - “Cà phê cóc” is a “cóc” coffee shop (well, “cóc” might be understood is a as toad in English, so “cà phê cóc” might be called “toad coffee shop”. I’ll explain this word after listing the kinds of coffee shop in Danang.)
    - “Cà phê vườn” is a “garden coffee shop”
    - “Cà phê hộp” is a “box coffee shop”
    - “Phòng trà” is a “tearoom” "tea room"
    Besides those kinds of coffee shops above, there is another one, which is merge a combination of the others.
    I will explain what “cà phê cóc” is in this part.
    “Cóc coffee shop” is the a coffee shop with some small, short tables and chairs. Coffee there is very cheap. This kind of shop was first appeared in Vietnam long time ago. There are some hypothesizes theories to explain for the origins of the word “cóc” (according to my seeking on the internet). But it still revolves around “a toad”.
    - The first, is that “cà phê cóc” has the short chairs. When we sit on these chairs, we are in the squatting position like a toad. However, today this kind of chair did not isn't used in a “cà phê cóc”, so don’t worry if you'll have to squat down when you go to any “cà phê cóc” visit one in Danang.
    .........

    Thanks Carol for your journal. It was very interesting, and I liked the part about aquatting like a toad :). Most of the changes I suggest are just to make it shorter, and more like how native speaker would write. Keep it up!!!

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    May 4, 2014
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    Gậy bóng chày lớn nhất Hôm nay, tôi sẽ viết về một cái khoác lác ở Canada. Có lẽ, nước này đùng là có hàng trăm địa điểm thu hút khách du lịch. Mỗi cái thú hút nổi tiếng vì có gì đó dúy nhát. Thí dụ, khoảng 30 kilo-mét xa nhà tôi, đó là chiếc gậy bóng chày lớn nhất trên thế giới. Dó 15 mét cao và được làm bắng hợp kim nhôm. Vào những ngày tốt đẹp xưa kia, hki tôi đi học trường cao đẳng gần đó, tôi đã coi sinh viên khác mân mê gậy bóng chày và quay chiếc vọng 90 độ. Thật là vui thú! Dôi khi trời lộng gió thổi mạnh, cái đó đã trở nên rất sôi đọng. Không may mắn, sau đó nhân viên thành phố làm cái đó được buộc chặt. Bây giờ, vui vẻ cua chúng tôi xong rồi. Bạn có thể xem bức ảnh của chiếc gậy cóng chày ở dưới đây.
    May 4, 2014
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    COFFEE IN DANANG (PART 1)

    Thanks for Jake about for the idea of for this entry!
    Hi there! Today I want to write the an entry about Coffee in Danang. The first Firstly, one of my friends on Skype gave me an idea about Coffee in Vietnam, but it’s really a wide topic. With my limited knowledge, I am afraid that some people from Hanoi and Saigon would smile will laugh at me. So I would  will instead focus on Coffee in Danang and mention something around general information on Coffee in Vietnam in to the best of my ability. 

    The first, Unneeded, because you used the same phrase in the previous paragraph. Coffee is called “cà phê” in Vietnamese. This word has the is of French origin, from “café” of French. originally meaning "cafe". The first coffee farm in Vietnam was built by the French in Northern of Vietnam in 1888. Today, Vietnam becomes one of the countries exports coffee most i top coffee exporting countries in the world.
    Last thursday night, I went to the a coffee shop with my friend. There are lots of kinds of coffee drinks in on the menu. There are Vietnamese Coffee and Italian Coffee. But I will only focus on the Vietnamese coffee in it. You don't need to include in it because it is unneeded. The fact it's on the menu is already understood.
    There are:
    1. Black coffee (I guess it is Danang style)
    2. Black coffee with condensed milk (still Danang style)
    3. Black coffee Saigon style
    4. Black coffee with condensed milk Saigon style
    5. Black coffee with cream
    6. Condensed milk coffee with cream
    7. Chocolate coffee
    8. Coffee with Rum
    9. Baileys coffee.
    I think this menu is not enough. They should put “Bạc sỉu” in it. ^ _ ^. I’ll explain what “Bạc sỉu” means in the next part of this entry.
    Thanks for your reading and hope y’all <- made me smile :) could help me to correct it!

     

     Very good writing (much better than my Vietnamese). Keep it up, nhé? :)

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    April 26, 2014
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    Warrior girl

    I'm warrior girl. Warrior Girl (Capitalize the letters because you are referring to yourself).
    Studying a new language has never been so very easy. Before looking forward to helping I can look forward to recieving help from someone, I must be patient with myself ! I need to get set myself. Sometimes, someone add friends with me adds me as a friend. I were am happy for that. Practice on day by day. I'm searching the for an effective way to study. Never give up. 

    Today will be better than yesterday.Go girl ! girl! (Don't forget: no spaces between the word and exclamation mark).


    Em Viết hay lắm! :) Keep up the good work!

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    April 25, 2014
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