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Hi,my name is Yanzhao Fan.I am from China,and I am a college student.I like English,there is no reason.All in all,I like it very much. And I want to make friends with everyone. Hope we can be good friends.I have Skype and Facebook.You can add me.
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    我的中文进步(我的中文进步了)

    大家好!

    好久不见啊!才通过的(刚经历的)夏天我非常忙,一直都没有空儿来italki写一些作文,所以我借口大学课程的开始(所以我趁着大学课程的开课)来这里写一下。
    今年是我学习中文的第四年,已经(有)不少时间了!虽然时间过得很快,我还觉得我的全面中文水平还不太高(但我还是觉得我的中文总体水平不太高)。我们在大学把全部的语法都学好了(学完了),但是我目前(目前我)认为我最大的缺乏(不足 or 缺点)是词汇和生词(掌握的不好)。比如说,我的英文比我的中文好极了(好多了),所以各种资料,(比如:)书、视频、音乐和录音我都看得懂听得懂,没问题(“没问题”可以去掉)。这样我不费力地天天遇到英文(这样一来,我每次遇到英文都可以毫不费力地理解其中的意思),自然地让我的语言能力增强(自然而然地,我的语言能力得到了增强)。可是中文的问题真的不一样!因为有很多词语我还不认识,连看一般正常(“正常”可以去掉)的资料也不容易。我总是要找一些为学习的资料(帮助学习的资料),不能随便上网找找(查找)我喜欢的题目。

    幸运的(幸运的是),我刚刚(从iPad上下载了一个可以让我看双语的小说)。(我可以)一边看中文,一边看英文的翻译。不错!我就读完了一个关于“象人”的故事,七个章(七个篇章),不长不短,水平比较容易(“容易”改成简单,更口语化),因此很有趣看(看起来很有意思)。

    我希望能继续使用这个办法增加我的词汇能力。

    Hope I can help u with ur Chinese.

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    September 30, 2015
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    Skit about American family

    Hello! Me and my group had to write two skits showing the difference between American and Chinese families. We would appreciate any help! I am attaching the second skit and the English versions of both to different entries.

    美国的家

    第一章

    场景一:女儿 今年五岁。

    爸爸:早上好,女儿!
    妈妈:早上好,女儿!
    女儿:早上好,爸爸妈妈!(在中国口语中,一般都叫爸爸妈妈或者爸妈) 
    妈妈:幼儿园 怎么样?
    女儿:幼儿园非常好。我和我的朋友们玩了一个游戏叫鸭鸭鹅。我画了这只狗。
    妈妈:你画的很漂亮。
    爸爸:女儿,我给你钱在小学买午餐。
    女儿:谢谢爸爸!谢谢你们给我钱在小学买午餐。
    妈妈:吃健康的食物。
    女儿:我要买比萨!再见!

    场景二:女儿今年十二岁。

    爸爸:早上好女儿!
    妈妈:早上好女儿!
    女儿:早上好,爸爸妈妈!
    妈妈:今天中学怎么样?
    女儿:中学非常好。下月我即将要演一个叫“罗密欧与朱丽叶”的话剧。我很兴奋!
    爸爸:我们为你感到很高兴。
    妈妈:我们希望你能表演的惟妙惟肖!
    爸爸:你应该做令你高兴的事情!
    女儿:你们说的对!我是一个非常好的演员!再见!


    场景三:女儿今年十八岁。

    爸爸:早上好女儿!
    妈妈:早上好女儿!
    女儿:早上好爸爸妈妈!
    妈妈:女儿,你正在做什么?
    女儿:我正在写我的文章和我的大学申请。我想要一个真正好的大学(知名大学)的录取通知书。
    妈妈:好吧。女儿,你想学习什么专业?
    女儿:我很喜欢美术。我想学习美术专业。
    爸爸:你不要担心,我们希望你很快乐。
    妈妈:祝你心想事成!
    女儿:谢谢你们!我会成为一个非常好的画家!再见!

    场景四:女儿今年二十五岁。

    爸爸:早上好女儿!
    妈妈:早上好女儿!
    女儿:早上好爸爸妈妈!
    爸爸:女儿,你有没有找到一套房子?你不能永远住在家里。 
    女儿:您说的对。我大学毕业了。我也有一个工作。现在我是一个成年人。
    妈妈:你必须结婚。你需要为我们生很多的孙子(在中国,可以说为家族开枝散叶)。
    女儿: 好吧!今天我会去看不同的房子。再见!

     

    Maybe its not good about my correcting, hope it will help u.

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    September 14, 2015
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    Long time no see Hey,italki.I haven't visited you for a long time.I miss you very much.So I'll visit you frequently.I think it is necessary to improve the language skill between us.Anyway,I love you,italki.
    August 21, 2015
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    It's easy.Which someplace do you want to go is equal to 你想去哪个地方。So,which sth do you want to buy is equal to 你想买什么东西。
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    December 4, 2014
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    族,you can regard it as a nation.In China,there are 56 nations(民族). While,人,you can regard it "where are you from?",for example,you comes from Russia,so you are a 俄罗斯人。Can you understand?
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    December 2, 2014
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    Impression of A song of ice and fire Recently,I have fallen in love with a book named A song of ice and fire.It is written by Geogre.J.J Martin.I love everyone in the book,and the special writing way.I was impressed by the Ned Stark,and other people.I just want to say,this book makes me admire the fantasy world,makes my life more colorful.
    December 2, 2014
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    Who can talk with me on Skype or Facebook?
    November 27, 2014
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    Do you like using Facebook?
    November 27, 2014
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    Should we stay up late?
    November 25, 2014
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    你需要一本汉语字典。 规律:you can regard it as a rule of nature.It is objective.For example,sun rise at the east,fall in the west. 规则与规定:规则is only a noun.it's meaning equal to 规定。For example,you should follow game's rule.But 规定 is also verb,you can say,law 规定 us do not do something. 规矩:Actually,it is also equal to 规则,规定,and it is noun,but it is informal,you can see it in some Chinese TVshows. 规章:it is some rules,Provisions of company, For example,as a worker,you should follow your company's 规章。 Read dictionary,it will help you. :)
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    November 23, 2014
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