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    hello i am kendi please read my IELTS compisition thx very much your suggestions are important to me WRITING Today, the high sales of the popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Today, the phenomenon has aroused our attention that since our country has opened up and made the reform policy, the economy condition of China has promoted a lot. People have many spare time to enjoy a convenient and affluent life and accept new objects. At this time, advertisements has gradually entered ours vision which using its deep and strong advertising claims and famous spokensman to deliver a message to the public that the product in the advertisement is unique and wonderful. I do not have a mind to criticize a few advertisers have a tendency to guide consumers to buy something they do not need actually, after all, both sides are willing to buying and selling, making money is unquestioned moral truth to sellers. Yet, in my opinion, the high sales of popular consumer goods have a lot of connection to the advertisements which appearance is not advantage to consumer themselves and sustainable development. I have read a interesting and meaningful joke in a magazine. A boss in order to test his employees’ abilities about the originality of the advertisements, ordered them to sale ice boxes to the people who live in the South Pole and combs who are baldhead. Advertisements are public mediums that should have spread goods which meet people’s demand really and avoid promoting sales which are fancy without substances. And customers must have a conscious brain before you buy something without wasting and showing off. Money and materials can be used in more useful place.
    March 31, 2014
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    母亲的故乡

    本人母亲的故乡是冲绳的一个村。冲绳位于日本的南方部,中国的东方。气候是非常炎热,下雨多多雨,好像四季如夏。冲绳人很繁华,顺水推舟依山傍水,这是家喻户晓的。日本的建筑与是好像中国的建筑有类似的地方,例如首里城,今归仁城等等。冲绳的风景很漂亮,这风景让人爱不释手(流连忘返),眉飞色舞。
    交通是如果从东京来到冲绳的话需要坐飞机,大概要近3个小时左右。赴冲绳要钱比较多的,虽然机票比较贵,但有很多特色饮食,冲绳菜口味比较清淡。不过冲绳有很有名的菜,就是苦瓜豆腐,苦瓜苦死了非常苦,要是不能吃苦的人吃苦瓜的话,一定脑子里一片空白。但我爱苦瓜如命,因为健康的关系,本人从小的时候到现在一向吃着这个呢。我现在在中国,找得很难所能吃到的苦瓜非常少,苦瓜让我感觉垂涎三尺。
    冲绳的风俗习惯是除夕的时候家族集聚在一起吃冲绳荞麦面,但这个虽然名字是荞麦面,但外观好像乌冬面的样子。其他特点在风俗习惯方面,人们生活地悠闲自在。,还有喝酒很多酒,俗话说酒后吐真言,大概就是这么来的吧。喝完后然后累得脑子都转不动了精疲力尽了,就开始睡觉,所以我感觉,出乎意料之外,有点儿胖的人比较多。不过但我感觉非常欣赏这种做法,我劝欢迎你们,有时间的话,欢迎来冲绳游玩。

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    March 30, 2014
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