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Friends
Everyone must have friends, because friends are an important part of your life. We can't choose who we are, but we can choose who are our friends. They are some one people who have something in common with you, and maybe you have similar interests. but However I think the most important qualities of a good friend should have are are things like being kindness kind, easygoing, and reliable. And the A best friend is someone who can provide you show you respect and provide you with emotional support.
<em>A very nice piece of writing! Be careful that you never start a sentence with 'And' or 'but'. When you want to use 'but' at the beginning of a sentence, it is better to use 'however'. 'Someone' is also one word. Keep at it - it's already very good!</em>
0 votedMarch 31, 20143- Je me presente Puisque je suis nouveau à ici, je vais dire sur moi! J'habite à Edimbourg, en Écosse, où je vais au lycée. J'adore la musique et le dessin - je suis un personne artistique! Maintenant, j'apprends l'anglais, les maths, le dessin, la musique, le français, l'histoire et le chemie à l'école! Mon professeur de français est très sympa et interessant, et elle est très bavarde quelquefois! Dans mon cours de français, il y a trois autres élèves et nous apprendons par notre professeur. Il y a un café français près de mon lycée, s'appelle 'Le marché français'. Nous allons là quelquefois mais je ne suis pas allé là pour un peu mois. Je dois aller là bientôt!March 31, 201410
Need your help! Correct my mistakes please! It's very important
Hello! My name is Marina. I study at school # № 429 in Lomonosov. I like sports very much. It is a my second favourite place in my life after school.
Every day I get up at 7 and do my morning exercises. Then I have a breakfast and go to school. After school I do my homework and go cycling with my friends. In winter I prefer skiing. I like all kinds of sports , but mostly I like volleyball, skate, roller-skate and swimming. But My favourite sport is basketball .
I am a member of the school basketball team. We took part at the cities competitions and took the received third place.
When I grow up I want to be a basketball player. This is my dream. But I have an another dream too…. Maybe someday I will bea be a famous dancer. I usually dance at school concerts.
I can’t imagine my life without sport.
Sports is are very important in our life lives. It helps teenagers to become strong and healthy . I don’t support bad habbits habits in our life. I now know that good habbits habits and our good health will help us in our future.<em>Nicely written! Just be careful on these few things for next time :)</em>
0 votedMarch 25, 20140The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie
Hey Guys :) How are you ? Today I started to read The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie by Muriel Spark.Is there anybody who has already read it and who knows about it ? It is for my literature class but I like reading, I like analyse characters,settings, and the theme of the book.
<em>Nicely written! I've just put in some extra words that were missed out that clear up the meaning of sentences</em><em>, but other than that well done! :-)</em>
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