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Hello! My name is Marina. I study at school # № 429 in Lomonosov. I like sports very much. It is a my second favourite place in my life after school.
Every day I get up at 7 and do my morning exercises. Then I have a breakfast and go to school. After school I do my homework and go cycling with my friends. In winter I prefer skiing. I like all kinds of sports , but mostly I like volleyball, skate, roller-skate and swimming. But My favourite sport is basketball .
I am a member of the school basketball team. We took part at the cities competitions and took the received third place.
When I grow up I want to be a basketball player. This is my dream. But I have an another dream too…. Maybe someday I will bea be a famous dancer. I usually dance at school concerts.
I can’t imagine my life without sport.
Sports is are very important in our life lives. It helps teenagers to become strong and healthy . I don’t support bad habbits habits in our life. I now know that good habbits habits and our good health will help us in our future.
Nicely written! Just be careful on these few things for next time :)
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