Just..

I'm on a bus heading home and I'm surrounded by people who seem to be sick. Currently the temperature here is dropping sharply so many people are <s>suffering from</s> getting / catching a cold. I bundled / wrapped myself up to protect myself but It's not enough for today's weather.

My familly

Hello. I'm a Polish lady born and living in Wrocław city. Wrocław is located in south-west Poland. My family isn't <s>a</s> very big. I have a husband, and two daughters who are in Primary school. My older daughter is named Maja and the younger one is called Jagoda. They are both <s>comunicative</s> talkative / bubbly and popular girls. They get along well with their peers. Maja is tall for her age. She paints very nice pictures. She often <s>to </s>goes shopping for clothes. She is <s>ashamed</s> shy* of performances in front of lots of people but when she talks with another person face to face it's not a problem for her. Maja loves to do make up. She goes for German lessons with a tutor.

Jagoda is skinny because she doesn't eat enough. She is average height. She likes to ride rollerskates and swim. She loves to dance at home when no one sees her. She stuttered when she spoke until to 7 years of age. The whole family took therapy for stuttering 4 years ago. The results were very positive. Now it's no longer a problem.

My husband is fat because he eats unhealthy food. He is a steel worker in a brass foundry. He loves to cook very much. When I come back at home a warm meal awaits <s>for </s>me. He helps me to clean up at home. We do it together. In the summer, our whole family <s>to </s>travels 20 kilometers each day by bicycle. We love cycling. We live in a cottage with a garden.

My parents are retired. Mum worked as a math teacher and Dad worked as a taxi driver. I have brother who is 7 years younger than me. He is a taxi driver like Dad and he is a successful soccer coach in a small village <s>with successful</s>. Next time I will something write about myself.

Talks face to face: That's great! Great phrase.

Wow, I learned so much about your family. What a lovely notebook entry.

Skinny / thin - thin is okay for people, but it sounds bad. Skinny is better.

Communicative / talkative / bubbly - communicative sounds serious, like business. Talkative is better. Bubbly is nice too, they mean the same thing, but bubbly is talking lots like bubbles in cola.

Obese / fat - Obese is okay, but it sounds serious. A doctor may say that. Fat is better.

last day in 2019

When I look back this year, <s>there have been*</s> So many things happened and there were many changes. I didn't expect to spend last year<s> of 2019**</s> in Chicago. I decided stay <s>more </s>3 more months in Chicago. <s>It's never going to be another time</s>, I might never come back, so I hope I <s>spend </s>have a<s> </s>good time. I'll do my best. I need to speak more <s>speaking </s>English. I <s>better</s> hope I make some new friends.*** I hope to <s>good end the last day in 2019 </s>end 2019 well, and be happier in 2020.

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/* have been works okay here, but 'many things' sounds like 많은 물건, so you need to put happened here.

/** 'last year' and 'of 2019' both mean the same year, so it sounds a bit odd to put both of those.

/*** I better make some new friends = '새 친구 만나면 나-' but in English, 'I hope' works perfectly here.

This was pretty good, though!

I got a job

I got a job a month and a half ago. It’s a kind of trading job. So far I think my company is not too bad. But who knows?

I just want to develop my career path in this company. The truth is, that’s <s>everything </s>most important / all* It’s a shame that the company only deals with importing. :(

*that’s everything is a little ambiguous.

try ‘that’s all’ or ‘that’s most important’ - it depends on what you mean specifically.

This was a great journal entry!