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Please make my essay to be corrected
Nowadays, more and more Internet users insist that museums and art galleries are not needed because historical relics? or masterpieces are available to see online. In this essay, I will explore why I absolutely disagree with their opinion for several reasons.
First of all, the resources on the web have some limitations. This is mainly because they are in digital form which cannot be touched, and may be incorrectly interpreted due to_frauds or misleading information. Conversely, in a historical museum, visitors recieve detailed descriptions in terms of the historical facts from curators and are able to grasp them completely. The three-dimensional structure of the relics also plays a significant role in improving people’s comprehension. Therefore, the materials in museums are much more useful in comparison with the mere digital images on the Internet.Awesome work!!
0 votedMarch 25, 20141Nauryz
Nauryz-it's а holiday, celebrated in Asia. Nauryz-it's something like New Year, but passed (?) in Asia. Nauryz is celebrated on March 22 and accompanied with traditional singing, dancing, and a traditional dish-Nauryz kozhe. On Nauryz all celebrate and wish luck and health to each other. Everyone has fun and joy on this day. It's a holiday of peace, goodness and accord. I like Nauryz.
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0 votedMarch 22, 20141Bad at cooking
My mom always says that I have to learn to cook, to do whatever I want to do in the kitchen, to get by on my own. I lived alone for two years and I gave my way for food (?). Well, I can make eggs and instant noodles, haha, that's easy. When I try to do somenthing more complex I make mistakes and the food doesn't seem_ agreeable (tasty?), the taste either. Also I'm a bad eater, not that I want to be fussy but I can't eat anything, I just don't like it, what can I do? I don't eat a variety of foods, like legumes, vegetables, soups, seafood, spicy food and foreign food. I never tried like sushi (maybe one day I could try it, but certainly I will not like it). I just love the unhealthy food, and if I am that way for too much longer I can say goodbye to my health. In my uncle's house they always do something that I don't eat, but I think if I don't accept it or just run away at lunch time it will be unpleasant and rude, so I force myself to eat whatever it is. One day I saw a beef liver on my plate, that is my worst nightmare, only the smell makes me sick, and I could'nt eat that type of food, haha, so I ate everything but the liver.
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0 votedMarch 21, 20141A thinking about studying
I have no idea to talk some what, but I want to write something in italki. Recently I studied English hard, the reason why did that is that I want to learn more in college. I feel it is not enough to listen in class and I feel it is boring on some subjects, maybe it is useless, while you should study the stupid subject in your daily. Now I think back to high school, about that time we recited the English words and the short conversations, it was really terrible dream, it is fresh in my mind, my English was bad,so when I got my test paper I always looked at the score it was low enough, it _ hurt my self-respect. Time flies like arrow, the time of studying in high school was passed away , while the level of my English didn't improve, now I realize it is not enough to improve your level of something through hard working, but it is a must if you want to success, so you should have correct method to do it, then you can reach it.Now I am walking in the way of studying.
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0 votedMarch 21, 20140I have a lot of work to do
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Tomorrow morning I'm not going to work because I'm going to work from home. Lately, we've had a lot of clients coming in and out of our workplace and a lot of phone calls so you can't focus on the projects and meet your deadlines. Therefore, tomorrow I will work at home, so I can focus on the deadline I have next Friday. I have to code an entire booking reservation system for flights, so I guess that tomorrow I will have a "funny" day. <em>(This sentence wasn't wrong but this sounds more "native")</em>
After lunch I will need to go to my workplace because I have a meeting, but I guess it will not take me too much time, or at least, that is what I hope.
On the other hand, I will try to practice my English after lunch and before my meeting. I have a speaking class with a teacher in the school where I'm studying. In fact, my english classes have become my "way to disconnect" from my internet projects. If I work hard in the morning, maybe I'll have free time to go to that class.
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0 votedMarch 13, 20141Make meaningful sentences
Hey, everybody. Today I'm going to rewrite some sentences. In the first part there are words without order, then there are the meaningful sentences.
1. She / a story / read :: She reads a story
2. The child / wait / his / for / father :: The child waits for his father.
3. Who / at / stand / gate / the? :: Who stands at the gate?
4. Less / I / eat / butter :: I eat less butter.
5. Slowly / my grandmother / walk / past :: My grandmother walks slowly past
*6. David / stroll / a field / across / sunny / one / morning :: David strolls across a field one sunny morning.
7. Hanging / a / trousers / pair / cupboard / in the :: There are a pair of trousers hanging in the cupboard.
8. Sharon / a cold / suffer / from :: Sharon suffers from a cold.
9. He / lessons / learn / his :: He learns his lessons.
10. That / bigger / get / child / every day :: That child gets bigger every day.
*11. She / like / does not / disturbed / to / if / be / she / work :: She doesn't like to be disturbed if she is working.
*12. Why / girl / that / on the table / stand? :: Why is that girl standing on the table?0 votedMarch 13, 20140
