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Please make my essay to be corrected Nowadays, more and more Internet users insist that museums and art galleries would not be needed because watching historical truths or masterpieces through the online is available. In this essay, I am to explore why I absolutely disagree with their opinion for several reasons. First of all, the resources on the web have some limitations. This is mainly because they are in digital form which cannot be touched, and may be incorrectly interpreted due to the frauds or misleading information. Conversely, in a historical museum, visitors receiving with detailed descriptions in terms of the historic facts from curators are able to grasp them completely. Three-dimensional structure of the relics also plays a significant role in improving people’s comprehension. Therefore, the materials on museums are much more useful in comparison with the mere digital images on the Internet.

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Please make my essay to be corrected

Nowadays, more and more Internet users insist that museums and art galleries are not needed because historical relics? or masterpieces are available to see online. In this essay, I will explore why I absolutely disagree with their opinion for several reasons.

First of all, the resources on the web have some limitations. This is mainly because they are in digital form which cannot be touched, and may be incorrectly interpreted due to_frauds or misleading information. Conversely, in a historical museum, visitors recieve detailed descriptions in terms of the historical facts from curators and are able to grasp them completely. The three-dimensional structure of the relics also plays a significant role in improving people’s comprehension. Therefore, the materials in museums are much more useful in comparison with the mere digital images on the Internet.

 

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