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Tim
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Jun 19, 2014
Good work today, Willy! Your level of English seems better than your previous scores, so we should work on strategies and tactics to get you to the magic band 7 :)
Moira, Cambridge,UK
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Mar 12, 2014
A keen student who needs to widen her knowledge of grammar and increase her vocabulary.
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    The manufacturing process of cement and concrete The two process diagrams illustrate the process of cement production and how it is used to create concrete. There are 5 main steps in the manufacture of cement, which begins with putting limestone and clay into a crusher to be crushed into powder. In the second step, the raw material is delivered to a mixer, so that the power can be mixed fully. After being transported to a rotating heater, the mixture is heated with fired. After that, it is ground by a grinder, before the cement is created. Finally, it can be sold in markets through being packaged with bags. In the process of concrete production, cement is one of the four major ingredients, which is mixed with water, sand and gravel in proportion of 15% : 10% : 25% : 50% in a concrete mixer. After a certain period of time, concrete is ready for construction. As can be seen, cement is a key component of concrete, whose manufacturing operation is relevantly more complex than concrete's.
    September 14, 2014
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    The causes of farmland degradation

    The pie chart presents four main reasons leading agricultural land to low yield. And the table illustrates a statistics about the situations of lands in three countries, which is affected by the mentioned causes.

    The pie chart shows that over-grazing is the dominant reason causing land degradation, which takes 35%. Deforestation is close behind with 30%, and the influence from over-cultivation is listed 3rd with 28%. Other factors only account for 7%.

    In the 1990s, the degradation of land in Europe was most serious, with 23% of total land degraded throughout the period. Oceania came next with 13% and North American ranked 3rd with 5% in total. Deforestation made up the largest percentage of 9.8% in Europe, followed by over-cultivation (7.7%) and over-grazing (5.5%). In contrast, only 0.2% of degraded land was due to deforestation in North America, while over-cultivation and over-grazing took larger proportions of 3.3% and 1.5% respectively. In Oceania, a lmost all land degradation was caused by over-grazing (11.3%). However, over-cultivation never appeared in Oceania over these years.

    As can be seen, over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation lead to/result in more than 90% of degraded land, which have different influences on the three mentioned countries.

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    September 13, 2014
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    The causes of farmland degradation The pie chart presents four main reasons leading agricultural land to low yield. And the table illustrates a statistics about the situation s of lands in three countries, which is affected by the mentioned causes. The pie chart shows that over-grazing is the dominant reason causing land degradation, which takes 35%. Deforestation is close behind with 30%, and the influence from over-cultivation is listed 3rd with 28%. Other factors only account for 7%. In the 1990s, the degradation of land in Europe was most serious, with 23% of total land degraded throughout the period. Oceania came next with 13% and North American ranked 3rd with 5% in total. Deforestation made up the largest percentage of 9.8% in Europe, follow by over-cultivation (7.7%) and over-grazing (5.5%). In contrast, only 0.2% of degraded land was due to deforestation in North America, while over-cultivation and over-grazing took larger proportions of 3.3% and 1.5% respectively. In Oceania, a lmost all land degradation was caused by over-grazing (11.3%). However, over-cultivation never appeared in Oceania over these years. As can be seen, over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation lead more than 90% of degraded land, which have different influences on the three mentioned countries.
    September 12, 2014
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    The energy consumption by fuel(1980-2030) The line chart presents a statistics of energy consumption in the USA from 1980 to 2014 and a relevant projection before 2030. The consumption of petrol and oil dominated throughout the period, which was 35 quadrillion units in 1980, followed by a decrease of 4 quadrillion units by 1985. After that, its data rose up to slightly over 40 quadrillion units by 2014, although there was a fluctuation from 1985 to 2014. It is predicted to shoot up to approximately 47 in the following 16 years. The consumption of coal and natural gas changed similarly between 1980 and 2014, which were 16 and 20 quadrillion units respectively in 1980, both increasing to just over 25 quadrillion units by 2014. Coal is estimated to increase rapidly to over 30 quadrillion units by 2030, while natural gas will remain stable at 25 quadrillion units. In 1980, the amount of using nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower all stayed at 4 quadrillion units. Then, there was an upward trend for nuclear and solar/wind, with the data increasing to 7 and 5 respectively. Both of them are expected to stay at the same levels until 2025, when they start to rise again. While the figure of hydropower dropped back to 4 quadrillion units after several increases, which is expected to stay at this level before 2030. Overall, the USA rely on petrol and oil heavily not only in the past, but also in future. While is use of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower seems relevantly insignificant.
    September 11, 2014
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    The time of telephone calls in the UK The bar chart presents the changes of the time people in the Uk spent on three kinds of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002. It is clear that the fixed line calls made up the largest amount over the period. The number of minutes for local fixed line calls increased steadily from slightly over 70 billions, until 1999 when it reached the peak at approximately 90 billions and started to decline over the following 4 years, with the data dropping back to 70 billions in the year 2002. There was a continuous upward trend for the figure of national and international fixed line calls throughout these 7 years, with the number increasing from just under 40 billions to over 60 billions. The time the UK residents took on mobile calls rase slowly over the first 5 years, while it shot up to about 45 billions by 2002. As can be seen, local fixed line calls accounted the biggest number among the three categories over the 7 years, although it started to decline from 1999. While the time for the other two kinds of telephone calls was increasing all the time. As a result, the gap between the three types had narrowed considerably.
    September 9, 2014
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    The ages of the populations

    The four pie charts present a statistics of residents' ages in Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and a relevant prediction for the year 2050.

    In the first two charts of Yemen, the percentage of people aged from 15 to 59 is projected to rise from 46.3% to 57.3% between the year 2000 and 2050. While the proportion of people under 14 years old is foreseen to decline by 12.1% from 50.1% during the 50 years. There would will be a slight increase for the ratio of people aged over 60, which is from 3.6% to 5.7% from the year 2000 to 2050 in expectation.

    In the other two charts of Italy, approximately two-thirds people in Italy are were 15-19 years old in the year 2000, which is projected to decrease to less than a half after the following 50 years. The group of Italian over 60 years old takes 24.1% and 42.3% in the year 2000 and 2050 respectively. In the year 2000, 14.3% Italian are were under 14 years old, however, this data is estimated to fall to 11.5% by the year 2050.

    As can be seen, the group aged 15-59 is expected to take the first place in both Yemen and Italy in the year 2050. On the other hand, the people over 60 years old in Yemen are much more than Italian in of the same age group, not only in the year 2000, but also 50 years later.

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    September 8, 2014
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    The ages of the populations The four pie charts present a statistics of residents' ages in Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and a relevant prediction for the year 2050. In the first two charts of Yemen, the percentage of people aged from 15 to 59 is projected to rise from 46.3% to 57.3% between the year 2000 and 2050. While the proportion of people under 14 years old is foreseen to decline by 12.1% from 50.1% during the 50 years. There would be a slight increase for the ratio of people aged over 60, which is from 3.6% to 5.7% from the year 2000 to 2050 in expectation,. In the other two charts of Italy, approximately two-thirds people in Italy are 15-19 years old in the year 2000, which is projected to decrease to less than a half after the following 50 years. The group of Italian over 60 years old takes 24.1% and 42.3% in the year 2000 and 2050 respectively. In the year 2000, 14.3% Italian are under 14 years old, however, this data is estimated to fall to 11.5% by the year 2050. As can be seen, the group aged 15-59 is expected to take the first place in both Yemen and Italy in the year 2050. On the other hand, the people over 60 years old in Yemen are much more than Italian in the same age group, not only in the year 2000, but also 50 years later.
    September 8, 2014
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    The island before and after the construction The two maps illustrate the dramatical changes of the island between before and after the construction for tourism. The length and width of the island are approximately 200 meters and 90 meters respectively, which is surrounded by the sea with a beach on the west corner. The forests of the island spread on its western and eastern parts. While in the middle of island, there are a lot of bare lands. After the construction of various tourist facilities, a pler is built on southern coast of the island, which connects the earth and the ships. In the center, a reception is established there that is circled and linked to the pler by the vehicle track. Along the vehicle track, the restaurant is built in the north. On the west side of the reception, there are six accommodations that are linked by footpath with each other, Meanwhile, nine similar accommodation are set in the east of the reception. Besides, the beach is developed into a swimming area after the construction. As can be seen, the development brings significant changes to the island. The new island become a wonderful place for traveling.
    September 7, 2014
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    Women Should Be Allowed to Join The Army

    With the gender gap in many different fields closing, a part of people consider that governments should allow women to join national military departments, such as the army, the navy and the air force. From my perspective, it is necessary that countries open this policy for the females, although there are some difficulties to put with puting this idea into practice.

    Doubtlessly, almost all countries are engaging on in gender equality. Opening military positions for female citizens is would be/could possibly be one of the most important achievements. From my understanding, legislating to permit female soldiers does not only mean to enhance the employment of this group but also show the development of democracy. Further more, women need the opportunities of working in troops the forces to realize individual ambition, to perform civic duties and to show genuine patriotism. To some extent, military departments are one of the most ideal places to make contributions for a country.

    Nevertheless, some sexual gender features of female soldiers would be could be/is likely to be barriers for performing as well as male ones, especially the relatively weak average physical strength and psychological quality. As a result, nations have to spend a longer period and pay more funds to foster train them. In addition, there is another social responsibility of for the majority of women that they need to get pregnant and bring up a the next generation. While, sometimes, the intense working environment in troops the forces has might have a negative effect on pregnancy. Besides, children in families that in which/where both parents join the army would suffer from loneliness and insecurity. It means that without parental protection, these children are easier to be hurt and bullied physically and mentally.

    All in all, allowing women to join the army is a necessary and meaningful policy, which helps to ensure the female’s females' legitimate rights. However, governments should be careful about setting corresponding regulations to make sure the normal life of female soldiers’ families. From above, I agree with allowing women to join in the army.

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    July 19, 2014
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    Women Should Be Allowed to Join The Army With the gender gap in many different fields closing, a part of people consider that governments should allow women to join national military departments, such as the army, the navy and the air force. From my perspective, it is necessary that countries open this policy for the female, although there are some difficulties to put this idea into practice. Doubtlessly, almost all countries are engaging on gender equality. Opening military positions for female citizens is one of the most important achievements. From my understanding, legislating to permit female soldiers does not only mean to enhance the employment of this group but also show the development of democracy. Further more, women need the opportunities of working in troops to realize individual ambition, to perform civic duties and to show genuine patriotism. To some extent, military departments are one of the most ideal places to make contributions for a country. Nevertheless, some sexual features of female soldiers would be barriers for performing as well as male ones, especially the relatively weak physical strength and psychological quality. As a result, nations have to spend a longer period and pay more funds to foster them. In addition, there is another social responsibility of the majority of women that they need to get pregnant and bring up a next generation. While, sometimes, the intense working environment in troops has a negative effect on pregnancy. Besides, children in families that both parents join the army would suffer loneliness and insecurity. It means that without parental protection, these children are easier to be hurt and bullied physically and mentally. All in all, allowing women to join the army is necessary and meaningful policy, which helps to ensure the female’s legitimate rights. However, governments should be careful about setting corresponding regulations to make sure the normal life of female soldiers’ families.
    July 17, 2014
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