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Women Should Be Allowed to Join The Army
With the gender gap closing (I think better word placement) in many different fields, a part of some people consider that governments should allow women to join national military departments, such as the army, the navy and the air force. From my perspective / In my opinion, it is necessary that countries open this policy for to the female women/females. Although there are some difficulties to with/ that come with put putting this idea into practice.
Doubtlessly, almost all countries are engaging on in gender equality. Opening military positions for female citizens is one of the most important achievements. From my understanding, legislating to permit female soldiers does not only mean to enhance/ increase the employment of for this group but it also shows the development of democracy. Furthermore, women need the opportunity of to working work in troops (in order) to realize individual ambition, to perform civic duties, and to show genuine patriotism. To some extent, the military department are is one of the most ideal places to make contributions for to a/your country.
Nevertheless, some sexualbiological features of female soldiers would be barriers for performing as well as male ones soldiers. especially The relatively weak physical strength and psychological (quality - doesn't really work here. maybe disposition, traits or attitude. It is difficult I am not sure how to say this.) would be especially difficult. As a result, nations would have to spend a longer period of time and pay more funds in order to foster train them. In addition, there is another social responsibility of for the majority of women. That they is: the need to get pregnant and bring up a the next generation. While Sometimes the intense working environment in the troops has may have a negative effect on pregnancy. Besides, children in families that in which both parents join the army, would suffer from loneliness and insecurity. It means that without parental protection, these children are easier are more likely (?) to be hurt and bullied physically and mentally.
All in all, allowing women to join the army is a necessary and meaningful policy which helps to ensure the female’s legitimate rights. However, governments should be careful about setting corresponding regulations to make sure ensure the normal life of female soldiers’ families.
Women Should Be Allowed to Join The Army
With the gender gap in many different fields closing, a part of people consider that governments should allow women to join national military departments, such as the army, the navy and the air force. From my perspective, it is necessary that countries open this policy for the females, although there are some difficulties to put with puting this idea into practice.
Doubtlessly, almost all countries are engaging on in gender equality. Opening military positions for female citizens is would be/could possibly be one of the most important achievements. From my understanding, legislating to permit female soldiers does not only mean to enhance the employment of this group but also show the development of democracy. Further more, women need the opportunities of working in troops the forces to realize individual ambition, to perform civic duties and to show genuine patriotism. To some extent, military departments are one of the most ideal places to make contributions for a country.
Nevertheless, some sexual gender features of female soldiers would be could be/is likely to be barriers for performing as well as male ones, especially the relatively weak average physical strength and psychological quality. As a result, nations have to spend a longer period and pay more funds to foster train them. In addition, there is another social responsibility of for the majority of women that they need to get pregnant and bring up a the next generation. While, sometimes, the intense working environment in troops the forces has might have a negative effect on pregnancy. Besides, children in families that in which/where both parents join the army would suffer from loneliness and insecurity. It means that without parental protection, these children are easier to be hurt and bullied physically and mentally.
All in all, allowing women to join the army is a necessary and meaningful policy, which helps to ensure the female’s females' legitimate rights. However, governments should be careful about setting corresponding regulations to make sure the normal life of female soldiers’ families. From above, I agree with allowing women to join in the army.
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