Please, I need your help! Thank you!
The compliance into the care of Alzheimer patients. NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN--FOR EXAMPLE YOU COULD SAY COMPLIANCE WITH CLINICAL GUIDELINES OR COMPLIANCE WITH ANYTHING ELSE. I'M NOT SURE WHAT TYPE OF COMPLIANCE YOU ARE REFERRING TO
During my three years of studies, I TOOK a lot of practical training courses ON? hospital establisHments and services.
In one of them, I EXPERIENCED a situation which LED me to numerous reflexions [OK BUT AWKWARD. I WOULD PROBABLY SAY "taught me to some lessons learnt]. So, I decided to [draw up] [FOCUS] my dissertation on this subject :
"To what extent, will the nurse in EHPAD (Etablissement d'Hébergement pour Personnes Agées Dépendantes : Dependant old people's home [HOUSING FOR DEPENDENT SENIORS]) reach the compliance WITH the daily care OF Alzheimer patients opposed to ?" SORRY EVEN WITH THE CORRECTION I'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT. COMPLIANCE WITH WHAT? DO YOU MEAN "TO WHAT EXTENT DO EGPAD NURSES PROVIDE APPROPRIATE CARE FOR ALZHEIMER PATIENTS?"
I realized that THERE IS A LARGE POPULATION OF ELDERLY personS WITH DEMENTIA. Because of THEIR fragility, THEIR age and THEIR pathologies, we often find THEM IN our care services. I found IT interesting to write about the methods of management of patients with dementia.
Writing FROM my FRAME OF reference, I noticed that there was an impressive [number of documents] [LITERATURE] on this [matter] [TOPIC]. I understood the importance of [the searchs on this pathology] [WHAT DO YOU MEAN HERE]. The consulted works brought me new knowledge ==>[I LEARNT FROM MY LITERATURE SEARCH].
During the interviews with the nurses working in EHPAD, I [deepened the field methods of sick person care] [NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN, DID YOU REFORM THE PROCESS OF CARE AT EHPAD?].
In conclusion, I took note that [theX] knowlegde of the disease and the patient was crucial for [theX] better care.
With adapted training courses, the nurses reached a better method to the approval of the care. [I THINK I MISSED THE CENTRAL POINT OF YOUR NARRATIVE. I DIDN'T SEE ANYTHING ABOVE ABOUT AN ADAPTIVE TRAINING COURSE, OR ABOUT APPROVAL OF CARE, WHICH I ALSO DON'T UNDERSTAND... AND I WORK IN THE FIELD OF PUBLIC HEALTH]