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The compliance into the care of Alzheimer patients.
During my three years of studies, I made a lot of practical training courses in hospital establisments and services.
In one of them, I lived a situation which brought me to numerous reflexions. So, I decided to draw up my dissertation of the end of my studies on this subject :
"To what extent, will the nurse in EHPAD (Etablissement d'Hébergement pour Personnes Agées Dépendantes : Dependant old people's home) reach the compliance into the daily care with Alzheimer patients opposed to ?"
I realized that the mad elder person was in a large number in the population. Because of her fragility, her age and her pathologies, we often find her into our care services. I found interesting to write about the methods of management of patients with dementia.
Writing of my reference frame, I noticed that there was an impressive number of documents on this matter. I understood the importance of the searchs on this pathology. The consulted works brought me new knowledges.
During the interviews with the nurses working in EHPAD, I deepened the field methods of sick person care.
In conclusion, I took note that the knowlegde of the disease and the patient was crucial for the better care.
With adapted training courses, the nurses reached a better method to the approval of the care.
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The compliance into the care of Alzheimer patients ? i don't understand.During my three years of studies study, I made attended a lot of practical training courses in hospitals establisments and services.
In one of them, I lived experienced a situation which brought me to numerous reflexions reflections. So, I decided to draw up my dissertation of the end of my studies on this subject :
"To what extent, will the nurse in EHPAD (Etablissement d'Hébergement pour Personnes Agées Dépendantes : Dependant old people's home) reach the compliance into the daily care with Alzheimer patients opposed to ?" ????
I realized that the mad elder person elderly dementia sufferers was are in a large number in section of the population. Because of her their fragility, her their age and her their pathologies, we often find her them into our care services. I found it interesting to write about the methods of management of patients with dementia.
Writing of my reference frame my literature review, I noticed that there was an impressive number of documents on this matter. I understood the importance of the searches on regarding this pathology. The consulted works brought me new knowledges.
During the interviews with the nurses working in EHPAD, I deepened? the field methods of sick person care.
In conclusion, I took note that the knowledge of the disease and the patient was crucial for the better care.
With adapted training courses, the nurses reached a better method to the approval of the higher standard of care.
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The Compliance into the care of Alzheimer patients.During my three years of study, I did made a lot of practical training courses in hospital establishments and services.
In one of them, I encountered/experienced lived a situation which made me reflect. brought me to numerous reflexions. So, I decided to draw up my dissertation at of the end of my studies on this subject :
"To what extent, will the nurse in EHPAD (Etablissement d'Hébergement pour Personnes Agées Dépendantes : Dependent old people's home) reach the compliance into the daily care with Alzheimer patients opposed to ?"
I realized that the mad elder people with dementia existed person was in a large numbers in the population. Because of their her fragility, her age and her pathologies, we often find them her into our care services. I found it interesting to write about the methods of management of patients with dementia.
Writing about of my reference frame, I noticed that there was an impressive number of documents on this matter. I understood the importance of the researchs on this pathology. The consulted works brought me new knowledges.
During the interviews with the nurses working in EHPAD, I enhanced deepened the field methods of care of the sick person care.
In conclusion, I took note that the knowledge of the disease and the patient was crucial for the better care.
With adapted training courses, the nurses would be able to better care for these patients. reached a better method to the approval of the care.
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The compliance into the care of Alzheimer patients. NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN--FOR EXAMPLE YOU COULD SAY COMPLIANCE WITH CLINICAL GUIDELINES OR COMPLIANCE WITH ANYTHING ELSE. I'M NOT SURE WHAT TYPE OF COMPLIANCE YOU ARE REFERRING TODuring my three years of studies, I TOOK a lot of practical training courses ON? hospital establisHments and services.
In one of them, I EXPERIENCED a situation which LED me to numerous reflexions [OK BUT AWKWARD. I WOULD PROBABLY SAY "taught me to some lessons learnt]. So, I decided to [draw up] [FOCUS] my dissertation on this subject :
"To what extent, will the nurse in EHPAD (Etablissement d'Hébergement pour Personnes Agées Dépendantes : Dependant old people's home [HOUSING FOR DEPENDENT SENIORS]) reach the compliance WITH the daily care OF Alzheimer patients opposed to ?" SORRY EVEN WITH THE CORRECTION I'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT. COMPLIANCE WITH WHAT? DO YOU MEAN "TO WHAT EXTENT DO EGPAD NURSES PROVIDE APPROPRIATE CARE FOR ALZHEIMER PATIENTS?"
I realized that THERE IS A LARGE POPULATION OF ELDERLY personS WITH DEMENTIA. Because of THEIR fragility, THEIR age and THEIR pathologies, we often find THEM IN our care services. I found IT interesting to write about the methods of management of patients with dementia.
Writing FROM my FRAME OF reference, I noticed that there was an impressive [number of documents] [LITERATURE] on this [matter] [TOPIC]. I understood the importance of [the searchs on this pathology] [WHAT DO YOU MEAN HERE]. The consulted works brought me new knowledge ==>[I LEARNT FROM MY LITERATURE SEARCH].
During the interviews with the nurses working in EHPAD, I [deepened the field methods of sick person care] [NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN, DID YOU REFORM THE PROCESS OF CARE AT EHPAD?].
In conclusion, I took note that [theX] knowlegde of the disease and the patient was crucial for [theX] better care.
With adapted training courses, the nurses reached a better method to the approval of the care. [I THINK I MISSED THE CENTRAL POINT OF YOUR NARRATIVE. I DIDN'T SEE ANYTHING ABOVE ABOUT AN ADAPTIVE TRAINING COURSE, OR ABOUT APPROVAL OF CARE, WHICH I ALSO DON'T UNDERSTAND... AND I WORK IN THE FIELD OF PUBLIC HEALTH]
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