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Hi everyone,I am Lillian.I come from China.I am studying English and Japanese but my language skills are poor[so sad].I have a cute cat named 小黑子=w=. I want to improve my skills and make friends with you.Let me be your friend!
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    朋友们！请帮我把这些句子改好！多谢！

    1）如果我们的公司采用一个全球战略，那我们就能跟国际公司竞争。

    2）有一位很明智睿智[明智means 'right and good' 睿智means 'smart']的老头告诉我，如果别的人对你不好[you can delete or not,both are right,deleting is to make it better reading]，别忌讳记恨[忌讳sth. 记恨sb.]他们，最好是原谅他们。 

    3）我觉得如果我把这个申请书及时的写完，我的得到奖学金的几率应该更高一些。

    4) 那位学生把别的[to better reading]人的秘密去告诉了[represent the past]他的同学。现在没有人要跟他交朋友，活该！

    再一次谢谢你们！

    [I think @Zhang Dong's correction is very good.]

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    February 14, 2014
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    February 13, 2014
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