True detective

True Detective is a television series produced for HBO in 2014. It is a thriller. The first season has eight episodes, each for an hour long. chapters of one hour long.

This series tells the story history of two detectives who investigate a case where a serial killer kills murders children and (girls). They pursuit the killer for more than two decades and the story shows what happened in the past and what happens nowadays.

The performances of the actors are wonderful and how they tell the story is told is amazing. It is a real thriller where every viewer enjoys every minute of it this series because of their plot. (slang for this sentence....It is a real thriller where everyone watching it is sitting on the edge of their chairs)

Although I have not watched the last two chapters I recommend this series because it is one of the best TV shows of the last decade. It is not the typical cop show because series of policemen and furthermore, how this series shows the the way they develop the characters and their relationships between the characters is fantastic/awesomemarvellous.

Good Job! By the way, I love this series too!!

carnaval

This week is carnaval"s holiday in my country!!!Is a very fun party and there are a lot of people on the street and music and dance.
Un Galicia is very tipical folk music,with the pepper, in this party

My comments are more general english

This week is Carnival, a holiday in my country! It's a fun festival with a lot of people partying in the streets, with music and dancing.

Galicia is a very traditional (or you can say typical) folk music at this party. (Or you can say...Galicia is a traditional folk music that is played at this festival.

...I see alot of entries for this Carnaval...sounds awesome!!

Good job! 

My Spanish Academy

Every Saturday, at my Academy, we have a beach volleyball championship, and a Mojito party. After that, the students have to perform a classic spanish poetry theater play.

Then, everybody will take a bus tour (take a bus to tour) the capital of my region, with enough time to shop, take pictures and visit a club (go to the club).

My corrections are in everday English. Good Job!

An unsuccessful application. Part II

It’s a shame I didn't get the post in this company because the Terms and Conditions of Employment were fantastic. The salary amount would be 50000€ per year, paid monthly. In addition, the employees would participate in the benefit plans of the Company and receive a generous bonus if the company achieved their goals and exceeded the last year profits.
The company’s hours of operation are Monday to Friday from 7:00 to 15:00. Employees are expected to work a minimum of 40 hours per week but if they need you to work overtime, you will be paid to 50€ every hour. It sounds fantastic, isn’t it?
The requirements for this position is that you would be expected to travel up to 15% of the time. Can you imagine it? It was my chance of a lifetime. Travelling around the world ( or traveling for work) , learning different cultures and improving my English language.
Now I am going to forgot this disappointment. I am going to rest now and maybe I will visit you in a few days. That is all for now.

Take care and regards to the family.

Good work! I wrote my edits in common English. 

Hey, your message moved me. I want to encourage you to continue working towards your goal! Don't give up! Just try, try again. Many times I didnt get a Job/goal, but in the end I did not give up and I accomplished my goals. Good luck and know that you can do it! Success consists of going from failure to failure without enthusiasm. 

difficult times in Argentina

Argentina is such a beautiful country with different climates and landscapes but governments is taking over the country. The prices are increasing more and more every day. What a shame!

i correted this notebook entry with common english/ slang english. I know in spanish they use the word pity, but in everyday English what a shame can be used as what a pity. I usually use the phrase " what a shame" 

 Good job!!