An unsuccessful application. Part II

It’s a shame I didn't get the post in this company because the Terms and Conditions of Employment were fantastic. The salary amount would be 50000€ per year, paid monthly. In addition, the employees would participate in the benefit plans of the Company and receive a generous bonus if the company achieved their goals and exceeded the last year profits.
The company’s hours of operation are Monday to Friday from 7:00 to 15:00. Employees are expected to work a minimum of 40 hours per week but if they need you to work overtime, you will be paid to 50€ every hour. It sounds fantastic, isn’t it?
The requirements for this position is that you would be expected to travel up to 15% of the time. Can you imagine it? It was my chance of a lifetime. Travelling around the world ( or traveling for work) , learning different cultures and improving my English language.
Now I am going to forgot this disappointment. I am going to rest now and maybe I will visit you in a few days. That is all for now.

Take care and regards to the family.

Good work! I wrote my edits in common English. 

Hey, your message moved me. I want to encourage you to continue working towards your goal! Don't give up! Just try, try again. Many times I didnt get a Job/goal, but in the end I did not give up and I accomplished my goals. Good luck and know that you can do it! Success consists of going from failure to failure without enthusiasm. 

Good work!! I notice great improvement over Part 1! Are you fixated on getting a job or is this a school assignment?

An unsuccessful application. Part II

It’s a pity that I haven’t obtained the post in this company because the Terms and Conditions of Employment were fantastic. The salary amount would be 50000€ per annum paid monthly. Besides the employees participate in all benefit plans of Company and receive a generous bonus if the company achieves their goals and beats last year's profits.

The company’s core hours of working are Monday to Friday from 7:00 to 15:00. Employees are expected to work a minimum of 40 hours per week but if the company needs your services beyond regular working hours, overtime will be paid at 50€ per hour. It sounds fantastic, doesn't it?

As per the requirements of this position, you will be expected to travel up to 15% of the time. Can you imagine it? It's a chance of a lifetime. Travelling around the world, learning about different cultures and improving my English! language.

After all I must forgot this disappointment , I am going to take it easy a rest time and maybe I will visit you in a few days. That is all for now.

Take care and regards to the family

An unsuccessful application. Part II

It’s a pity that I did not obtain a position haven’t obtained the post in this company because the Terms and Conditions of Employment were fantastic. The salary amount would be 50000€ per annum paid monthly. Besides the employees participate in all the benefit plans of Company and receive a generous plus bonus if the company achieves their its goals and beats the last year's profits.
The company’s core hours of working are Monday to Friday from 7:00 to 15:00. Employees are expected to work a minimum of 40 hours per week but if the company needs your services outside of working timetable hours, the overtime will be paid to at 50€ every per hour. It sounds fantastic, doesn'tisn’t it?
As per the requirements of this position, you will be expected to travel up to 15% of the time. Can you imagine it? It was my chance of a lifetime. Travelling around the workworld, knowing learning about different cultures and improving my English language.
After all Anyway I must forgot this disappointment , I am going to take a rest time break and maybe I will visit you in a few days. That is all for now.

Take care and regards to the family