sudden wealth

It goes without saying that everyone is eager for wealth. However, some lucky people get wealthy suddenly. For example, a man named Jack, he got lots of money by lottery. He had a huge amount of money around him, the smile on his face is kind of bright, many happy scenes flash upon his mind such as beauty, mansion and a luxurious car.
Nowadays, it's true that many people become wealthy suddenly. If he is very poor, the compensation can help his family make a life or move However, if the guy uses the money to drink or take drugs, he will be lost.
What should we do when we are confronted with this? As far as I'm concerned, the first and most important thing is having a correct attitude. No matter what happened, we should keep calm and make good use of it. To name only a few, we can donate to the welfare fund institution or Hope Project Primary School. On the other hand, we can invest some money.
Remember, prodigality is danger. It will ruin your life. In a word, wealth can bring happiness to us, and also bring us disaster.

Hope, He will pass.

2 weeks ago, my cousins visited Makassar. They visited Makassar because their mother was sick. They were in Makassar for 5days. Their mother is my aunty.

1 of them is an Indonesian Army. He lives in Balikpapan, East Kalimantan. And 2 again are Indonesian Air Force, one lives in Tarakan, East Kalimantan (He is serving in the border Indonesia-Malaysia), and one again lives in Kendari, Southeast Sulawesi. They all have married. I have close relationship with their children, even though they only visit Makassar once a year. My cousins told their children to call me aunt hahhha :| Sometimes, I feel like this --> :-/ Because i'm still 20 y.o, how can they called me aunty hehhe lol xD

My cousin's name who lives in Balikpapan is Ahmad. Now he is in Bandung, West Java for his last (final) test. I hope, he will pass his test. If he passes, InsyaAllah he will be serving in Lebanon.

We are all in Makassar praying for him, hoping he will pass. Aamiin 0:)

Ask the way

Today I wanted to go somewhere, but I didn't know how to get there when I arrived a crossroads. In that moment, I saw an old woman who was sitting there. I thought I better ask her.

'Excuse me.' I said.
No answer, and she didn't see me 
'Excuse me.' I said again.
'Oh, yes?' She said and saw me.
'Could you tell me the way to Guanyin street?"I asked her.
'Pardon?' She said.
'Could you tell me the way to Guanyin street?'I asked her again.
'Oh, I didn't catch your voice, my ears are very old' She said.
'Could you tell me the way to Guanyin street?'I Asked her
'I see your mouth is speaking, but I can't hear you.'
'What do I do?' I said to myself, 'Write? yes, I can write it to her.'
So I wrote what I want to say, she read it for a long time.
'sorry!' and then she smiled andsaid:' I can not see your writing, my eyes are old, too.'
I looked at her and smiled, too.
'Thank you very much!' I said. :(

Can somebody help me with the redaction of my dedications ??? please

I'm not sure about grammar !!
Help please :)

There is a number of people without whom this work would not have been achieveable; I want to dedicate this thesis to my whole family and friends who always supported me on my way.
To the woman I admire the most, the owner of my heart and Queen of my life, my lovely mom Ma Lupe.
To the man who lent me his shield and sword, the knight who has taught me how to face life, my dad Papá Pepe.
To my brother Juan, the one who although likes arguing away with me, I do appreciate so much.
To my oldest sister Mari who I consider as a second mother and source of my inspiration.
To my middle sister Lupe, the woman who is always in the best mood, the one who changes my mood with a single smile.
To my sister Sara, the person with the best sense of humor ever, the one filled with joy.
To my wise friend, the one who I lived unforgettable moments with, Mari Lu.
To the craziest girl in the world, Whom I consider more than a best friend my little sister, Tere.
To a very good friend, the one with the biggest smile, Erick
To a remarkable woman and coauthor of this work, Sofí.
To a very good friend, the adventurer of life, Sam
To the angel that God put in my way to light my path, Bicho.