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    Today

    It is snowing outside;  I think it is the first snow of this year. The piano from upstair woke me up. She/he must have a diligent mother because in even during the spring festival, that child continued practicing the piano.Yesterday I found  ("came across" might be better choice) some beautiful girls in my QQ group. I felt jealous and wanted to be a beautiful girl too: Not only wanting beauty on the outside appearance, but also inside as well. I want to be perfect. Even I know it is impossible, but I will try my best.
    Thanks for Nancy to correct my punctuation!

     

    I hope you understand my edits.  I changes a couple of sentences so it flows better (well at least in my head).  Hope you do not mind.

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    February 6, 2014
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    How many years can you work at the same job?

    I heard that Americans never work at the same job for many years.
    And Also if you can have many job experiences , that would that be good for Americans job(?)
    But Usually Japanese men will work at the same job for 10 -30 years or more.
    Sometimes Japanese workers (or "men" to stay consistent with the previous sentence) will change their jobs or start their own businesses.
    But in Japan, if you change your job a lot (or "frequently"), then Japanese companies won't hire you.
    Hmm I wonder how about other countries.
    For example, Canada or Australia ..
    I'm very interested in western countries :)

     

    I hope you can understand my edits.  

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    February 6, 2014
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    My meeting minutes: what do you think? and any ideas to raise money?

    Last meeting
    We talked about the place[s] (more than once place was considered) we want[ed] (past tense since it was the last meeting) to visit. It looks like it is going to be either Atlanta or Ashville, some time during April.
    To raise money for our trip, every one of us will do some research on the fundraise ideas. I will try to find out about the guidelines of selling food in school.
    These are the ideas we came up with:
    • CCI fundraising- Coupon Books
    • Crispy crème doughnuts
    • [$1] (dollar sign goes in front of the number) movie
    • Funding Organizations
    • Coffee, cookie bake, muffin sale, candy bars
    • Donations
    The place and date of the trip will be decided next week[.] (This sentence is not part of the list so a period is needed)
    Next week's agenda
    • Next week we will do two things:
    • Decide where we are going and how we are going to get the money
    • Play game boards!! – so bring your game boards

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    February 6, 2014
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    February 6, 2014
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    Which language do you suggest everyone speak? It would be a nightmare to have everyone in the world vote. Lol
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    February 4, 2014
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    [H]ello everyone. [Could you lend me a hand] to correct my grammar problem[s] because [I will be taking] the IELTS. [I]'m so worried about my test [now] and [I] really need the help.THX If you are learning the language, I suggest you should not write like you are writing a SMS.
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    February 4, 2014
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    One method is to write what is the meaning of life to you. This way you can't be marked incorrect for you own opinion. If you start the topic too broadly, you will run out of time during a test.
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    January 22, 2014
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    It is pronoun set: subject, possessive, object. He. His. Him. She. Hers. Her. I . My, Me. Who. Whose. Whom
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    January 21, 2014
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    After we turn off the gas range and so on, we quickly move under a table or desk to protect ourselves from falling objects.
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    January 20, 2014
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    I will try separate into 3 comments. When a fire broke out resulting from the earthquake, waiting for the fire truck was in vain because the road was damaged due to the disaster.
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    January 20, 2014
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