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    Yu Garden【introduction to tourist attractions】

    Yu Garden is a famous classical garden, located in Shanghai.  As the famous Classical Gardens of Shanghai, Yu Garden has  It has over four hundred years' of history, it and was designed in the uniquely with southern architectural style of the Ming and Qing dynastiesy. Over forty scenery scenic spots contribute to the charming natural beauty of the garden. Pavilious Pavilions, terraces, open halls, rockery fomations and ,pond are located perfectly throughout the park,and the perfect distinctive layout has been famous in the Jiangnan region since ancient times.

    Yu garden was used to be a privy the private garden of a high-ranking official in during the Ming Dynasty. It Beginning in the year 1559, it took 20 years to build be built from the year 1559. Over time, Time passed and it was destroyed many times on numerous occasions. Fortunately the main scenery spots were protected when Shanghai was liberated liberating shanghai in 1949. Later from the year Since 1956, Yu Garden was has been repaired many times and its formal beauty restoredreappeared.
    【写完不忍直视啊。。。标准的翻译我不想看,想听听大家的意见】


    The original:
    豫园是上海著名的古典园林,已有400多年历史。花园设计独特,具有明清两代南方的建筑艺术的风格。园内共有40余景,景色自然迷人,亭台楼阁、假山池塘和谐对称、协调均衡,其布局之精致自古至今闻名江南。
    豫园原为明代一大官的私家花园,始建于1559年,直到20年后才建成。此后曾几经变迁,屡遭摧残。所幸的是,至1949年上海解放时,园内的主要景点尚完好无损。从1956年开始,豫园多次修缮,重现其昔日光彩。

    【中文原文只是参考,不一定要翻译得一字不差,谢谢。】

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    February 8, 2014
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    Friends

    Hi, everyone,Glad I'm happy to meet you here. I really love learning languages very much.i I want to find a friend who can help me with my poor English.i I hope that we can be real friends and learn how to communicate better!

     

    "I love learning languages very much" is echnically correct, but it doesn't sound natural.  " I really love..." is better.

     

    your English is already very good!

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    February 7, 2014
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    New Year's Day

    The day before yesterday, I went to Sanshengxiang. It was is a beautiful nursery market of flowers and plants. There were many wonderful and inexpensive fabulous and cheap plants. I hung out went there with my friend there. I was am not a good gardener but I wanted to go out of curiousity so I just looked curiously. My friend bought a small plant as a gift for her classmate.

     

    in English, nursery is a place where plants and flowers are sold so you can use that

     

    I think wonderful is a better word in this case.  Cheap usually means low price and poor quality.  Inexpensive means it is a low price, but can also be good quality.

     

    If Sanshengxiang is the name of the city, then the sentence should be "It has a beautiful..." if the name of the market is Sanshengxian, then "It is a beautifu..." is correct.

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    February 3, 2014
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    Eating machine

    Everyday spent in eating.I will be a fatty soon.

     

    There are a few ways to say this.  I would say:

     

    I eat too much every day. I will be a fatty soon.

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    February 2, 2014
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    Encourage My Husband

    Tomorrow you u will have give a your speech to your colleagues. I hope you could be can relax and try your best. ,a After this speech you may will be a popular guy in your company.  ,tTrust yourself and take it easy. You are always the best in my heart

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    January 23, 2014
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    sorry, I read your sentence too quickly. if someone asks the question: "where is he" and the answer is "he is in with the BoD" it means he is meeting with them.
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    January 21, 2014
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    A Board of Directors is a group of people. you use with to say you are part of a one or a group. you are with your classmates, with a team, with your neighbors. you use "in" to signify a place. for example, you are in China, you are in your home, you are in a theater. "with" usually implies time aspect. for example, you might say "I was with my best friend last night". if there is no time element, you could us "on". for example, "he is on the board of directors". there are some exceptions and also other ways to signify you are "in" or "with" people, but this is the general rule.
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    January 21, 2014
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    Book Love

    I am happy to find that I have special love to for books., wWhen I feel disappointed sad (I think sad is a better word because it matches sorrow), a good book can cure me easily, dragging taking (dragging has a negative feeling, taking is better) me away from sorrow and hugging me tightly.

    Certainly the difficulty of getting finding a charming book is the same as meeting a Mr.Right.

    Luckily, I have met found my favorite book. now, tThe feeling is so nice! I guess a wonderful book is better than a boyfriend, because you can always get comfort and understanding from a good book, mMeeting a man who is able to understand your mental world, however, depends on fate.

     

    Good job!!!

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    January 15, 2014
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    January 15, 2014
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    crystal's notebook entry: Apr 20, 2010

    donation Simply giving money is not adequate enough,what's more important is that we need to realise give from our hearts to protect our only one earth.then we can have a safety environment and live a happy and wonderful life happily and wonderfully.*_*

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    January 13, 2014
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