メキシコ へ行こう！

来週私と私の妻はメキシコに旅行の為メキシコへに行きます。私達はの初めてメキシコに行きます。

私は昔にスペイン語を勉強したから、

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①私は昔、スペイン語を勉強していたので、or

②昔、私はスペイン語を勉強していたので、

また少し勉強しましょうと思いました。

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また少し勉強をしようと思いました。

でも実はに私は日本語が好きです。毎日日本語を使いたいです。

だからスペイン語を練習する時に、ちょっと我慢できませんでした。スペイン語を勉強しながら日本語を練習したいだと考えていました。

(This sentence is correct, but the following sentence is more natural)

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スペイン語を練習していた時、日本語の勉強もしたくなってしまい、我慢が出来ませんでした。出来れば、両方の言語の勉強(or 練習)をしたいと考えていました。

これからもそして日本語の勉強を続けきます。

IELTS WRITING

A glance at the table e provided reveals the percentage
of five different items consumed by consumer on five different
countries in 2002.

On the whole,it is evident that among the three
types of items,the consumption of Food/Drink/Tobacco was
higher in five countries than other items,followed by Clothing/
Foot wear and Leisure/Education.More specifically,the country which
most consumed Food/Drink/Tobacco was Turkey, it was 32.14%
and this figure was the biggest consumption on the table.
Even Sweden which the least consumed Food/Drink/Tobacco was 15.77%.

Meanwhile,the amount of the highest consumption on Clothing/Footwear
was 9% in Italy.In addition,the consumption in other
countries were between only 5.44 and 6.63%.

As for Leisure/Education, the figure was considerably low, compared
with other items. Spanish consumer expenditure was the lowest in
this table at only 1.98% while in Turkey consumers expenditure
was 4.35%.

Overall, it seems that particularly in Turkish people expenditure on luxury
goods was numerous. Furthermore, it is interesting to note that
the table shows Italian people were interested in Fashion compared
with other countries.