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I'm a university student and I hope to improve my French :)
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Helene Cormier
French
Feb 16, 2014
Merci, Melanie! Je suis contente que mes cours te plaisent! :)
Helene Cormier
French
Feb 2, 2014
Merci Mélanie! Je suis contente d'entendre ça! :)
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    Biotechnology

    I'm a student of Biotechnology. It is very interesting. I chose it because I want to create and improve products for services and help people. I think is a future career and (try: it is a quickly advancing field). It is important for the humanity because there now are a lot of diseases now and with biotechnolgy we can analyse/analyze the DNA and find the cure.
    The Biotechnology has differents colors. For example, the green is the color for the study of the transgenic plants and biofiltration. My favorite color of Biotechnology is the gray because it is the study of the contaminants cleaning, biofilter (biofiltration) and bioremedation. I think it is a very important topic because the pollution is killing the world.
    We must take care of the world and it is necessary to make awareness about the problem.
    Recently, I worked with "humus", is a biofertilizer made with a (type of) Californian worm. The porcess is very strange because it is made with the fecal waste of the worm, but the Californian worm needs a specific conditions like pH, temperature, humidity and more.
    I'm about to finish my degree/program/education and I'm very happy because I'm learning (or: I learned) a lot of interesting things.

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    February 26, 2014
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    An official letter on the subject: "Broken door"(Example)

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to you about some problems with the outer part of the door. We bought a two doors from your company three years ago. What do you say if I tell you that (try: Unfortunately,) one of the doors is a defective. One of them looks like a great, but the second one has an exfoliation (try: is peeling) on the outer part. More interesting moment,(or maybe: Currently,) we are making repairs in the apartment and it is not used all the time. I don't understand how, but it happened (but it did). I attached some photos. (Please) Contact with me as soon as possible.

    Yours faithfully. (or just: Sincerely, )

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    February 25, 2014
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    When were you happiest at work?

    My happiness is when someone thanks me for helping them.
    I think that brings happiness to them and me.
    So my happiness is everyone's happiness. (or: I'm happy when everyone else is happy). 
    This is the case at work. We enjoy working more if we share information (try: communicate). 
    I was a caregiver. I'll explain my exprience.
    We must know (try: understand) our customers. For example their health, pleasure (try: likes and dislikes), relations (try: family) and diseases.
    We can get (this) information from their family and the hospital where they were cared for.
    But we should know their further information.
    We couldn't see them all the time.
    It is important to get information from every staff (member).
    In conclusion, we can work better (together).
    So*, my happiness is talking and shearing information. 

     

    *You can use "So" in the beginning of a sentence when talking but not in writing. 

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    February 25, 2014
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    What do you know about Brazil?

    Hi guys, I have not written in a long time. I watched a video today about a Brazilian girl talking to foreigners why they would not come for the World Cup in Brazil and explaining why not do this. She asked people on the street what they knew about Brazil, and I was curious ... I'd like you to tell me what do you know about Brazil?

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    February 25, 2014
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    C'est 2014! C'est une autre année avec beaucoup de nouvelles possibilités. Parmi mes nombreux résolutions de nouvelle année, je veux parler français plus couramment. J'ai hâte de se faire les amis sur ce site ou trouver un professeur génial. Souhaite-moi bonne chance! :)
    January 2, 2014
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