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When were you happiest at work?
My happiness is when someone thanks me for helping them.
I think that brings happiness to them and me.
So my happiness is everyone's happiness. (or: I'm happy when everyone else is happy).
This is the case at work. We enjoy working more if we share information (try: communicate).
I was a caregiver. I'll explain my exprience.
We must know (try: understand) our customers. For example their health, pleasure (try: likes and dislikes), relations (try: family) and diseases.
We can get (this) information from their family and the hospital where they were cared for.
But we should know their further information.
We couldn't see them all the time.
It is important to get information from every staff (member).
In conclusion, we can work better (together).
So*, my happiness is talking and shearing information.
*You can use "So" in the beginning of a sentence when talking but not in writing.
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