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When were you happiest at work? My happiness is doing that someone say thank you to me. I think that is happiness who someone and me. So my happiness is everyone is happy. In case is at work, Our happiness are working be better that We share information. I was a caregiver. I'll explain my exprience. We must know customers. for example healthy, pleasure, relations and disease. We can get some information from relations and hospital where they was cared. But, we should know their further information. We couldn't see them anytimes. It is important to get information by each staves. Conclution We can work better. So my happiness that talking and shearing informaiton.

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When were you happiest at work?

My happiness is when someone thanks me for helping them.
I think that brings happiness to them and me.
So my happiness is everyone's happiness. (or: I'm happy when everyone else is happy). 
This is the case at work. We enjoy working more if we share information (try: communicate). 
I was a caregiver. I'll explain my exprience.
We must know (try: understand) our customers. For example their health, pleasure (try: likes and dislikes), relations (try: family) and diseases.
We can get (this) information from their family and the hospital where they were cared for.
But we should know their further information.
We couldn't see them all the time.
It is important to get information from every staff (member).
In conclusion, we can work better (together).
So*, my happiness is talking and shearing information. 

 

*You can use "So" in the beginning of a sentence when talking but not in writing. 

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