Why the television is not the greatest invention of the last century. 

A recent news article reports, that the most influental invension invention of the last century is in the eyes of youth is the television.

There is no doubt, that the lives of many are centered around this device. I think many of our readers are considering it  consider it the number one way to relax. Especially the young Young people especially can be observed watching "the telly“ night and day, often neglecting any work, even postponing crucially important tasks just to see the 800th episode of their favorite TV show. One thing to remember is that television serves yet another important purpose. One can hardly find a more potent and lethal instrument of manipulation of the public opinion. Of course the television is only a part of the mass media, but its role in it can not be underestimated.

Now, how does it fare though against a nuclear bomb? Being also an invention of the 20th century, it The nuclear bomb certainly had a much greater "impact“ as an invention of the 20th century.  During the Cold War, the Word was shaking with fear of the all-out nuclear war. It is nearly impossible to imagine that the cause of such fear could ever be an armada armed with televisions. If used correctly, they might shift the popular opinion, but will never persuede entire countries to obey almost any orders.

The television might have changed the way we relax and spend time one with other with one another. The bomb has changed our world and possibly prevented its destruction. Without it, who knows how cold would the Cold war had been. cold the Cold War may have been.

Very nice, I wasn't quite sure what the last sentence was trying to say though. A lot of your commas and Quotation marks were not necessary. However, you did an excellent job of creating powerful and sophisticated sentences and arguments. I especially like "an anrmada armed with televisions" It sounds very poetic!