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New Year In this year 2014 have high expectations of great achievements, to start with my driver's license, get my paper and travel and also start the year well in my new intership :)

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New Year

In 2014 I have high expectations of great achievements. To start with, to get my driver's license, my papers and travel. I also want to begin the year well in my new internship. :)

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New Year

In This year 2014, I have high expectations of  for great achievements. To start with, I want to get my driver's license, get my papers and travel and also start the year well with my new internship :)

 

 

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Yet another way to correct this:


New Year

I have high expections of great achievements in 2014.*  To start, I want** to get my driver's license.  I also want to get my papers, travel, and start*** the year well in my new internship.  :)

 

*With 2014 in the beginning of the sentence, a comma would be necessary.  Putting it at the end is not necessary, but it takes out the pause in the beginning and sounds smoother.

**this could also be "plan," if you want to convey that you are planning to get your license instead of merely wishing to get it.

***as another pointed out, "begin" sounds better here

 

Note that we all found different ways to split up the list, so you can do it a lot of ways.

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