Corrections · 6
New Year
In 2014 I have high expectations of great achievements. To start with, to get my driver's license, my papers and travel. I also want to begin the year well in my new internship. :)
New Year
In This year 2014, I have high expectations of for great achievements. To start with, I want to get my driver's license, get my papers and travel and also start the year well with my new internship :)
Yet another way to correct this:
New Year
I have high expections of great achievements in 2014.* To start, I want** to get my driver's license. I also want to get my papers, travel, and start*** the year well in my new internship. :)
*With 2014 in the beginning of the sentence, a comma would be necessary. Putting it at the end is not necessary, but it takes out the pause in the beginning and sounds smoother.
**this could also be "plan," if you want to convey that you are planning to get your license instead of merely wishing to get it.
***as another pointed out, "begin" sounds better here
Note that we all found different ways to split up the list, so you can do it a lot of ways.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
