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    Bees Guiding the Way

    In 1922, Lenin lived on a small hill which was (you <em>can </em>keep this but it sounds better without it) not far from Moscow. There was a beekeeper in the local area / There was a local beekeeper. Lenin often sent one of his men to invite him for a chat chatting. One day, he thought of asking the beekeeper on about beekeeping, but the man whom Lenin often sent to meet the beekeeper had gone to Moscow. None of his other men knew where the beekeeper lived. Therefore, Lenin decided to visit the beekeeper himself in person. While he was walking along the road, Lenin found a lot of bees buzzing in the flower. Observing the bees carefully for a while, he saw the bees fly into a garden after gathering nectar from flowers. There was a small house nearby the garden, He walked over to the house and knocked at on the door. The man who opened the door was the beekeeper. The beekeeper was a little surprised to see him and asked, "Hello, Comrade Lenin. Who led the way for you here?" He replied:"It was your bees that helped me get here."

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    February 26, 2014
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    School

    Today I decided to reminisce about my school days. What a great time it was! It's funny because but it seemed to be boring at the time but now that I'm thinking back on about it, it evokes only warm, pleasant feelings. Perhaps I had to think in about it with hindsight to finally realize what a wonderful time it was.

    Only now I've come to appreciate what my first teacher gave me. And If the last phrase seems strange to you, you should first know that Russian children have only one teacher until they are in 4th or 5th grade. That teacher teaches kids a wide variety of subjects. That's why I'm so greatful to my first teacher; she taught me a lot.

    My best friend has been so I have had the same best friend since the first grade. And I'm so happy to see that he's a man I can call a real friend, a buddy! We've helped each other so many times and more importantly, none neither of us has ever refused to help the other, no matter how big our problems were. So I'm quite sure he can say all those things about me as well.

    And of course, as a kid you practically have no real responsibilities. You don't have to worry about money, you don't have to think of putting food on the table, you're not responsible for anyone but yourself and anything like that. Hell, sometimes I want to go back there and become a kid again :) But it's when I scrap that thought because now I have a lot of people to care about and I like it very much that way. Going back to being a kid would mean to lose losing all those people, which I would absolutely hate to happen. So I'd rather stay where I am now and make sure I won't don't lose them :)

    Thanks Thank you for having read this text so far :)

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    February 24, 2014
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    Social life

    This is my sister's story, It's not mine... 


    I was lay lying down, waiting that for someone to knock on my the door, but that silence is horrible there was only horrible silence.
    I just heard my window grindind (not sure what you mean).
    I left from my house and I found to Mr. Coco and he who asked told me ''Why are you so alone?'' and I answered him, ''I'm looking for a friend.''
    He looked at me with an expression look of surprise and terror and I ran off left from there running!!!
    While he ran was running after me, I fell down.
    He took grabbed my feet and while I was shouting, I bit his arm.
    After that, it I took out a knife to cut an apple to share with him.
    Mr. Coco got it and since that day, we are have been friends.
    End

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    February 24, 2014
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    Love~

    Every day ("everyday" = adjective; "every day" = each day), every moment that goes by, I think of you. My brain tells me to give up, but my heart says I can't stop loving you. I spend all day dreaming of the moment you will would call to say you feel the same way. As much as I try to pretend, the truth is, I can't stop loving you. I don't know how to stop.

     

    Well done! Your errors are very minor!

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    February 24, 2014
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    A wonderful circus

     

    Yesterday my mother took me to see a wonderful circus performance. At first, we enjoyed the show on watching how the little monkey, who was dressed up like a child, climbed up the pole.wearing clothes,the monkey was dressed up like a child. Having climbed at the top of the pole When it reached the top, it did a handstand dragonfly and looked at the audience curiously with its big, a pair of round eyes looking at the audience curiously. The audience chortled with delight at its mischievous performance. It was also fun to watch the little bear stepped onto the wooden pellet board (Not sure what you mean here. Is 'board' correct?). The heavy black heavy bear climbed onto the wooden pellet board, stood up straight, moved its feet carefully, and then got the wooden pellet board to roll onto the seesaw. It had no sooner reached at the center of the seesaw than the other side of the seesaw fell. How nerve-wracking! The audience roared with laughter again. The goat did very well in walking on the steel wire. The goat walked on along the thin steel wire back and forth steadily as if it were walking had walked on the ground. The goat might as well performance its stunt (Not sure what you mean here). With its body stooping like an arched bridge, carefully, the goat carefully stepped onto a piece of round metal board with the size of a bowl mouth (Not sure what you mean here) which was inserted in the steel wire. The audience cheered with and applauded. We also saw other performances like the little dog doing maths, the monkey riding bikes and the horse getting throughfire circle jumping through rings of fire. The staff have clever ways good methods of making animals to follow their command.

     

    Well done! I'm unsure what you mean at certain points but I tried my best. Some really nice phrases in here such as "It had no sooner..."!

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    February 23, 2014
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    A FIRE

    Yesterday, when I was walking home came back from school on foot in normal at the usual time when On the way, I passed by a two-storey double tier shop that was on fire I saw a shop in fire. In At the same time, I heard somebody cry cried "FIRE!" 


    I went over to the shop immediately to understand try to figure out what had happened. I saw intensity The fire was so big, it had of the fire was big and spread from the shop to the warehouse nearby. The A neighbor who was close-by nearby came to find and help them immediately. They used a bucket to load water from the public tap and they to all pulled together to extinguish the fire. Somebody helped them to move out get rid of anything flammable articles.

    Not long afterwards, the fire truck came. The fire engine put out played on the flames (Is this what you are trying to say?). Someone who was completely fearless undaunted by dangers went into the shop to save people still in the shop on trapped in the fire. They made an all-out a huge effort. FinelyFinally, the fire was eliminate extinguished after an one hour late but the building was in ruins was nothing remains the same.

    Lucky Luckily, nobody was harmed. The police had to investigate the reason cause of the fire. the police to check.

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    February 23, 2014
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    Will our lives become better with only a few major world languages on earth?

    Various Many languages become extinct annually/every year. Whether or not our lives will be better with less fewer languages in the world, human lives are better or not has sparked debate.

    Some folks consider that the extinguishment language extinction of languages has to have a positive influences effect on us while the others think the opposite. Speaking for myself Personally, I'm side I agree with the latter.

    UnIndisputably, the extinction of languages negatively affects us negatively in a couple of several ways. First of all, languages dying out undermines the diversity of cultures cultural diversity. Every single language features represents a certain culture, therefore when a language is extinguished becomes extinct, the corresponding culture is jeopardised. Moreover, our ancestral heritage is somewhat lost through the disappearance of languages are the loses of our ancestor's heritages. Besides our appearance and blood heritage, they are language is one of a the few things that are handed down from our forefathers. Not to mention, there are our ancestral experiences and wits humour are integrated into our language. Furthermore, languages' death the death of languages leads to the a decrease decline in of new jobs numbers. Apparently, if some certain languages no longer existed don't exist any longer, then the relevant their respective translators and language teachers are would not have as many employment opportunities. needed on the employment market.

    Admittedly, there are advantages if languages are were to become extinct extinguished one by one until only some of them are left, there would be some advantages. Firstly, people would save much a lot of time in this case. Obviously, when lesser-known languages are all gone, the language barriers linked to them are eliminated too. Then, it is It would be pointless, then, for anyone to spend time to studying those languages. In addition, the extinguishment extinction of languages offers humans a more economical life. For example, businessmen would need fewer translators eninvolved in international trades, thus cutting down the cost of goods. in such a situation,as a result, the costs of goods are cut down.

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    February 23, 2014
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    My Hairpin

    Yesterday morning, when I brushed was brushing my hair, I caused my tiny hairpin to fall into a the washing machine. Unfortunately, at that time, the machine was had been running functioning for a while, so I couldn’t pick get the accessory out of the machine.

    After all of the clothes were done, I took them away from out of the machine. Meanwhile, I looked for it both in the machine and in the pile, but I neither found it couldn't find it. When I started another pile of clothes, Oh, my God, my the machine didn’t work at all!

    At that time, of course, my family knew why. They didn’t blame me for it that fault. Then my brother and my nephew repaired it. After one hour, they realized that my hairpin was the reason for the malfunctioning machine.

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    February 23, 2014
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