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A wonderful circus
Yesterday my mother took me to see a wonderful circus performance. At first, we enjoyed the show on watching how the little monkey, who was dressed up like a child, climbed up the pole.wearing clothes,the monkey was dressed up like a child. Having climbed at the top of the pole When it reached the top, it did a handstand dragonfly and looked at the audience curiously with its big, a pair of round eyes looking at the audience curiously. The audience chortled with delight at its mischievous performance. It was also fun to watch the little bear stepped onto the wooden pellet board (Not sure what you mean here. Is 'board' correct?). The heavy black heavy bear climbed onto the wooden pellet board, stood up straight, moved its feet carefully, and then got the wooden pellet board to roll onto the seesaw. It had no sooner reached at the center of the seesaw than the other side of the seesaw fell. How nerve-wracking! The audience roared with laughter again. The goat did very well in walking on the steel wire. The goat walked on along the thin steel wire back and forth steadily as if it were walking had walked on the ground. The goat might as well performance its stunt (Not sure what you mean here). With its body stooping like an arched bridge, carefully, the goat carefully stepped onto a piece of round metal board with the size of a bowl mouth (Not sure what you mean here) which was inserted in the steel wire. The audience cheered with and applauded. We also saw other performances like the little dog doing maths, the monkey riding bikes and the horse getting throughfire circle jumping through rings of fire. The staff have clever ways good methods of making animals to follow their command.
Well done! I'm unsure what you mean at certain points but I tried my best. Some really nice phrases in here such as "It had no sooner..."!
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