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    The busy day

    I am busy like a bee today. In the morning, i got up early earlier than everyone anyone in my department. it is was a miracle!so, i went to take a do exercise. <em>i think i am a early bird which will catch a worm ( I think it's irrelevant) </em>. but, in the next,all of students have had to take a physical examination. i am  was afraid of injection and blood. when i sat down in front of the nurse, i mostly nearly cried out. i hold held  my friend's hand tightly. the nurse said in low voice: what a timid girl. It's very embarrassing for me. what's more, i had to join the basketball match at 12:00. however, the bell ringing at 11:20 and because of the long way between class and dinning hall, i only have had 10 minutes to eating eat my lunch. After solving my lunch<em></em> that, i had to run to gymnasium for the match. there was fulled with course this afternoon i drowned in courses this afternoon  . It is a busy Monday!

    hi, NIce to be friends on Italki. Could you please help me with Chinese?

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    Greeting from new member^^

    Hey everyone!
    I'm a student in high school..I'm trying to learn and improve more my English skills..this is international language and it brings for our us many benefits..ex: for example you can study better, communicate and have (friendship with) friends in another countries ..and that's great..cause in the modern life, we always need to explore and expend our <em>horizon</em> (cliche) about the world...etc..
    I was accidentally know about this site when I was surfing the internet... I'm a new member here..and this website is really strange for me..so I hope that this site will be help me to learn more about this language.. Tks.

     

    <em>Hello Vietnam, I'm Ha. Nice to be friends</em>! :)

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    I'm from Vietnam. I'm learning English as the second language. Besides, I'm also self-studying Chinese.

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    Hi :)

    I'm Ha. I'm Vietnamese and I'm an English learner. Hope that we can exchange linguistic knowledge to improve our qualification.

    You can contact me via my Facebook account : http://www.facebook.com/nguyen.thuha.1610

    or Twitter : https://twitter.com/Ms_Ha28

    Hope to be friends and learn together! :)

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    Please help me to correct this essay for IELTS task 2

    Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Answer:
    Both parents and society expect each child getting good education to be a good person to contribute to the development of <em>society in particular and the world in general (Do you think that society and World are quite similar?!)</em>. But how to lead them go to the right way? That is the question which needed to be answered. Some people think that the children should be educated by their parents but others believe that formal education as schools is the place to do it. There is no right or wrong answer here but we should consider to each measure.
    There is no doubt that parents are the most affected factor to create children' behavior. Therefore, it's easy to understand how important of family educating is. Parents should teach children how to behave with other <em>members of whole family</em> family members and get on well with every people everyone. Besides, children discover new things through capturing adults' actions, that is why parents have to be a nice mirror for their children following.
    The others, however, trust in the education in school better to learn to become the well-behaved members of society. In formal training, children will be trained both widely knowledge and skills which is needed for their life. There are not only learning from what teachers give but also from other students and they can find their own way to adapt into small model of society.
    Personally, I strong believe that the combination between education by parents and in school could be the best way to bring children being an effective person for society. In fact, without one, <em>children of course leading to the wrong direction and becoming a bad one (NO VERB) </em>. For example, even in class, children are told to take care of the elders, they may not consider providing that they see their parents do pay enough respect and care for grandparents. So that, children are needed to teach both in family and at school.

    Thanks so much!

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    Traffic solutions

    It is true that traffic congestion is an insolvable problem in metropolises in modern life. Therefore, governments should be find an answer for to the difficult question to reduce influences on quality of life of people  life quality of people who live in these cities.

    One of the main the main caustes causes of traffic congestion is that commuters travel to work at the same time. In this essay, several solutions are listed below to repair this issue.

    Firstly, most people should be encouraged to use buses, undergrounds instead of driving private cars.Thus, goverments should improve public transportation systems and make them more modern and faster, <em>but with a cheap price.(?!)</em>

    Secondly, to decrease a volume of people commuting to heart  of cities the city center, government should move a part of workplaces to outskirts.

    Finally, employers should allow their employees work from home by connecting the Internet to work. This solution would not only help to avoid traffic congestion, but also reduce the employees' travelling costs and time.

    In conclusion, it is necessary to reduce the number of communters travelling to work at the same time in order to improve the traffic congestion situation by upgrading public transport systems, moving a part of workplace far away from center of cites cities, and encouraging employees to work from home.

    P/S: I practice for IELTS, so I want to know that my writing style is right or not.

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