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My first note about me
This is my first post and I would like to write something about me. I was born in Russia in Moscow. Now I live in Podolsk. I like chemistry, and that's why I am a student of Gubkin oil and gas University. My specialty is the processing of hydrocarbons and I would like to have a good job. That's why I'm leaning English. Nevertheless, I like to travel too. I want to visit USA, Australia, Canada. It's the second reason for me to learn English.
Hey this is a pretty great post! The only thing I noticed was comma splicing a bit. That's when you use a comma to seperate one long sentence that really should be two seperate sentences. (and it's awesome that you're into chemistry, I'm a chem major too. I work with nanomaterials).
0 votedNovember 14, 20130My first post
Learning languages is one of the most beautiful things can happen in your life. You meet people, you usually challenge yourself and feel very good when you can practice with a native speaker!
I think this is not the best post ever but it's mine, it's the first ... and for me that is amazing ! :DJust noticed a few small errors, I think the spacing between the commas were just typos or just a stlye thing. Becareful with run on sentences. You want to make sure that when you complete a thought you make that a sentence. Often I'll have a really long, continuous thought in my head that sounds really good together, but it turns out to be a lot of words. When that happens, try to find a place where it make senses to split it up. A sentence needs a subject, an a verb, and you're golden.
Great first post though!0 votedNovember 14, 20130
