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My first note about me This is my first post and I would like to write something about me. So, I was born in Russia in Moscow. Now I live in Podolsk. I like chemistry that's why I am a student of Gubkin oil and gas University. My specialty is the processing of hydrocarbons and I would like to have a good gob, that's why I'm leaning English. Nevertheless, I like to travel too. I want to visit USA, Australia, Canada. It's the second reason for me to learn English.

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My first note about me

This is my first post and I would like to write something about me. I was born in Russia in Moscow. Now I live in Podolsk. I like chemistry, and that's why I am a student of Gubkin oil and gas University. My specialty is the processing of hydrocarbons and I would like to have a good job. That's why I'm leaning English. Nevertheless, I like to travel too. I want to visit USA, Australia, Canada. It's the second reason for me to learn English.

 

 

Hey this is a pretty great post! The only thing I noticed was comma splicing a bit. That's when you use a comma to seperate one long sentence that really should be two seperate sentences. (and it's awesome that you're into chemistry, I'm a chem major too. I work with nanomaterials).

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