The young generation, their role in current social problems.
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There are those who believe younger generations have a vast amount of knowledge about some social drawbacks opposed to old people. In my view, I believe young people have more information about these issues and consequently more actions are taken to solve them.
Firstly, environmental issues are well known in our society but in particular by young people. Take as an example air pollution caused by old cars. Nowadays, the fashionable trend is to opt to buy electric vehicles in most of the major cities in the world. As a result, people agree with taking more eco-friendly choices and these actions have a positive impact on environment.
Another important problem is poverty which is caused by a growing population effect experienced in a considerably amount of countries. This situation cause a lack of jobs because they are not enough for people. Moreover, migration is a consequence of hardship lived daily by thousands of people in poor conditions. However, young society are more enthusiastic with being part of the solution for these difficult situations . As an example of this, donating money and bassic items for living are collected by freshman students each year in my university. These events are applied because this young generation are aware about this problem but also effective solutions are done by them.
Finally, the general opinion about animals rights has changed for the current society. Because situations as animals farming, circurs and films with participation of animals are exceedingly well controlled. For instance, in my country campaingns against zoos and circus leadered -the overwhelming majority- by young participants had an important role in the condemnation of circus in my city. Thus, it is more easy to avoid violence in animals if people take action and have a fair mind.
To conclude, not only the perception of young people about environmental issues, poverty and violence against animals is more fair than their ancestors but this group of people are more involved in solving these issues as well.