Hi Anee, In this phrase, you should just use your first name or full name. In China, when people introduce themselves, they would say the first name or full name. If you just want to tell people your surname, you should tell them this is the surname, like 我姓王。 but it will be a bit strange if you introduce yourself like that when the first time you meet your friends.

The sentence is correct, but normally we use “谢谢” alone. If you want to say you thank him, you can use “我感谢他”，that's a better way to say.

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我喺四川去旅行過咗一個月。我琴日返香港，所以會寫關於言語嘅嘢。我唔識講普通話，所以喺四川我唔可以講同locals（local is 當地人）溝通。我學過少少四川話（yes同I don't understand )。我傾計用四川話同locals傾計，佢哋好開心。
我朋友都係鬼佬。佢識講普通話，但當佢講同locals講嘢嘅時候，佢哋唔係好開心。
我以為覺得佢哋冇好開心，係因為普通話唔係佢哋嘅母語。
當我去華山嘅時候，我同樣經歷咗同樣嘅嘢。有嘢
(No idea how to say it Cantonese, but should be "when I was at 華山, I experienced something similar)
華山唔係四川，但係我見到幾個四川人。我傾計同佢哋用四川話傾計之後佢哋同我一齊食同我返。食飯。
(How to say "with mandarin that never happened)
之後我遲啲見到廣東人。我終於可以講同有人講話啦。我識少少廣東話，廣東人超開心。我哋一齊行山。
我嘅旅途之後我記得一個曼德拉嘅引用：
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes into his head
If you talk to him in his language, that goes to his heart.

我尋晚蒸我哋嘅年糕!

哇哇哇!!! 我做過年糕! （我做咗年糕）佢八年蒸，咁耐。（佢蒸咗八個鐘，好似八年咁耐）我做過同焦葉飯為睇嚟靚。（我用蕉葉嚟襯托靚啲）而家我嘅廚房係烏喱單刀但係我做過佢我做到喇； 工搞掂過。 搞掂曬！

Wow, wow, wow!!! I made 年糕! It for eight hours steamed, so long. I made with banana leaves for beauty. Now my kitchen is an absolute mess, but I did it； task complete!

“我好凜講廣東話同邊個邊個。。。

。。。但係我要練習。我覺舒服打字，寫低及讀廣東話。我係驚幾時我覺得港同邊個邊個。我唔記得我嘅字定可造句。

淨係講多會幫我。我會勤力。”

Hi Dano, I think I can understand what you say, but the grammar is not correct, so many people confused. The following is the meaning I guess:

我好耐無同人講廣東話，但係我要練習。我覺得打字、寫字同講廣東話都好舒服，當我同人講廣東話嘅時候，我會唔記得單詞同句子，但係講多啲先可以幫到我，我會勤力啲學噶！

我要上班-- 1、 I will go to work. 一会儿我要上班。（I will go to work later) 2、 I want to go to work. 我待在家里的时间够长了，我要上班。 （I stay at home too long enough, I want to go to work. 3、I have to go to work. 今天我要上班，不能和你出去了。（I have to go to work today, can not hang out with you.) 我得上班-- I must (have to) go to work. 不能再待下去了，我得上班了。（Can't stay any longer, I must go to work.) "得" is stronger than "要" in this case. Hope can help you :)