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- Receta - Chorizo y chocolate tapas Como hacer chorizo con chocolate tapas Ingredientes Chorizo Pan Aciete de Olivia Sal Guajillo y Chipotle Chocolate Direcciones 1. ponga el pan en el horno 2. pan cortado en rodajas (?) 3. ponga aciete de oliva sobre el pan. 4. ponga 2 - 3 piezas de chocolate sobre al pan. 5. ponga 2 - 3 piezas de chorizo caliente sobre de chocolate. 6. ponga un poco de sal. 7. ponga en el horno @ 130 gradies celsius para 8 minutos. fundir y calor 8. sacer del horno 9. poner en tu boca 10. Sonri'eDecember 5, 201540
Happy Valentine's Day!
The day before yesterday (or, "Two days ago", I received an email from Italki on about the special occasion of Valentine's Day. In this the email there was a picture of a heart in which you could it read "I love you" in many languages from all over around the world.
Then I realized something was missing. I looked and looked, but I couldn't find it! It wasn't there! They had forgotten to put "I love you" in Spanish!
I thought, "that's the first thing you learn when you learn any language, isn't it? Many people will continue on without knowing how to say 'I love You' it".
Well, I thought, "if others can fix many actresses' hips or Sarkozy's waist, I'm not going to be able to fix this!"
I opened Photoshop and I fixed it! So, if you didn't already know, now you do:
TE QUIERO
Happy Valentine's Day!***
Very well written, but I am helping you sound more native and tell a story.
"The day before yesterday" - In Spanish you have a word which is "anteayer", we don't have a word in English and it isn't very natural to say or write 'The day before yesterday" we would just say the length of time, "two days ago". It is more natural.
"I received an email from Italki on the occasion of Valentine's Day." - being that you wrote the word occasion, it is more natural to couple it with "speacial occasion of". Otherwise you can write this sentence as, "I received an email from Italki about Valentine's Day."
"picture of a heart" - better to include, "there was a graphic picture of a heart" being that it's an illustration and not just a photograph. Also sets the reader for the additional information that there is artwork on this "graphic".
"from all over the world" - this phrase works, but reads better as "from around the world."
"I thought, "That's .... " - you can also write, "I said to myself, "That's the first thing." Being that you are talking to yourself, you can also write this sentence this way.
I would write it like this:
Happy Valentine's Day!
Two days ago I received a Valentine's Day email from Italki. There was a graphic heart which read, "I love you" in different languages. Something was missing. I realized they forgot to write "I love you" in Spanish! I asked myself, "isn't this one of the first things you learn when you start learning a new language?" I want people to know how to say, "I love you" in Spanish. Then I thought, "if they can fix actresses' hips or Sarkozy's waist, I'll fix this!" I opened Photoshop and added the missing language. So, if you didn't already know how to say "I Love You" in Spanish, now you do: TE QUIERO
0 votedFebruary 15, 20142Violence
Today, I watched on television a report about violence on a targeting disabled person people.
Some young people (they are from 12 to 16 years old) would like to steal a mobile phone from a mental disabled person.This person doesn't They don't want (what don't they want? The phone?) and the young people hurt him and put his things in a lake. After, they hurt him and put (put what? him?) him in the lake just for "fun".
They made a video about this scene and posted in of it and posted on the internet. Thankfully, to people who had seen others saw/viewed this video and signaled flagged the video. The police were notified and arrived to identify the attackers. The identification of the attackers was easy to discovered because some of their friends identified them on in the video.
I respect disabled people. They don't have an easy life and they want to be treated as other people equals, not with differences.
I live in appartment and the first floor there is spot/apartment reserved for disabled people. So, i live with these difference and people and I don't notice the wheelchair. (Since you live w/ them and don't notice their differences, don't label them as "different". Furthers your point.)0 votedFebruary 4, 20140- Troppa nevica! Oggi, sta nevicando tutto il giorno. Ha nevicato i quattro pollici oggi e ci sarà più domani. Penso che ci sarà i dieci pollici da il weekend. Ho visto i bici e i alberi coperto con neve. Ho fatto la foto. In la foto vi può vedere una edifico in la distanza. La chiama, "The Freedom Tower" è La nuova world trade center.
February 4, 201460 - Mucha nieve en Nueva York. estaba nevando todas hoy. Nevó cuatro pulgadas y mas viene manana. Yo penso que habra diez pulgadas para la fin de semana. Yo vi bicicletas cubierto con nieve y todas los arboles tambien. Yo tomé una foto. En la foto se puede ver los arboles, los nubes y un edifico a lo lejos. Se llama, "Freedom Tower".
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