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Violence Today, I watched on television a report about violence on a disabled person. Some young people (they are from 12 to 16 years old) would like to steal a mobile phone from a mental disabled person. This person doesn't want and the young people hurt him and put things in a lake. After, they hurt him and put in a lake just for "fun". They made a video about this scene and posted in on Internet. Thanks to people who had seen this video and signaled the video, the police arrived to identify the attackers. The identification of the attackers was easy because sone friends identified them on the video. I respect disabled people. They don't have an easy life and they want to be treated as other people, and not with difference. I live in appartment and the first floor is reserved for disabled people. So, i live with the difference and i don't notice the wheelchair.

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Violence

Today, I watched on television a report about violence on a targeting disabled person people.

Some young people (they are from 12 to 16 years old) would like to steal a mobile phone from a mental disabled person.

 

This person doesn't They don't want (what don't they want? The phone?) and the young people hurt him and put his things in a lake. After, they hurt him and put (put what? him?) him in the lake just for "fun". 


They made a video about this scene and posted in of it and posted on the internet. Thankfully, to people who had seen others saw/viewed this video and signaled flagged the video. The police were notified and arrived to identify the attackers. The identification of the attackers was easy to discovered because some of their friends identified them on in the video.

I respect disabled people. They don't have an easy life and they want to be treated as other people equals, not with differences.


I live in appartment and the first floor there is spot/apartment reserved for disabled people. So, i live with these difference and people and I don't notice the wheelchair. (Since you live w/ them and don't notice their differences, don't label them as "different". Furthers your point.)

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there are too many violence acts in every place you go.... there are people so insane who hurt other without a real reason.. i don't know if you've seen that video about some guys who sellect a man or woman at streets and one of them have to this person...and they must knock out him or her... the "game", occording to these stupid guys, is called "knock out".... it's unbelievable how humanity little by little is disappearing...and we're becoming to animals...

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