The Shining! Could you help me? :)

The reviewers and the people in general think that "The Shining" is a great terror film, directed by Stanley Kubrick, and with Jack Nicholson as the main character of the story. It's a film based on a book written by Stephen King, but it’s not exactly the same argument story, because normally when you make a film from a book, you must change and adapt different things in order to create the best film possible.

We could say that this film has a great atmosphere, and the director knows how to control the entire film, making the viewers feel like if they could be there, inside the places that appear in the film. It has a great story, and of course, a great interpretation made by his main character, characterized by Jack Nicholson, and other great actors as Shelley Duvall or Danny Lloyd.

It’s a film where you will see how the madness can get into the mind of a typical man, and how this madness can make terrible things happen in the feelings and thoughts of a human.

I completely recommend this film to every fan of Stephen King’s books, or to any person who wants to see watch a great piece of art. You won’t be disappointed!

My lovely dog Toddy.

Half an year ago, I have got a dog. He was a gift from my sister.
His name is Toddy. He's a very cute dog, and was only five months old when he came into my life.
Toddy is a kind of Poodle, but not a pure poodle, usually be called teddy dog. I learned from the a website that the reason why our people call them teddy is only because of their hairstyle, when their hair gets long enough and is ready to be well trimmed, he just look like a teddy bear.
Toddy brings me and my family lots of fun and happiness, though sometimes he will also drive me crazy when he is naughty.
Like people always say, dogs is are human's best friends. I hope everyone who has a dog will love their dog all the time.

by Toddy do you mean Teddy? 

I'm writing in this notebook for the first time.

I have tried to study English before, but I had given up because I had almost had not chance to speak English. But now that I've found this website, I think I will to study English again.

A few lines.

Hi.

Today, I didn't go to the gym for to practice kickboxing, but I went to walk to the countryside instead. I climbed a mountain, and from there I have could seen to my town. The town seemed bigger.
In the countryside I saw insects such as grasshoppers, spiders, and other insect that I didn't know of. I have saw a rabbit running for countryside.
Today it's sunny and a little hot pero a Little.
This afternoon maybe I will go to the swimming pool, but I don't haven't the desire.

Can somebody correct my text?

I know this text isn't very good but I didn't know what I should have written.

Dear Sir or Madame,
I want to complain about the bad working conditions for workers in developing countries who are working employed for at your company. Why don’t you pay them more money for their work? Don’t you feel responsible for the bad lives of the your workers? Money isn’t all there is in life. You shouldn’t take the supplier with the lowest prices, you should take the supplier who treats his workers good well and who pays them enough money so that the workers have enough money to buy everything they need for living. Moreover, it isn’t good that the people have to work the whole day. It’s no use to work so long, because after specified time you can’t concentrate yourself anymore. Consequently, many mistakes happen.
Sincere regards, 
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1. "... there is in life." I improvised. You could take out the 'in life' part if you would like.

The Storm Number Thirteen

According to the weather forecast today, this afternoon a storm originating from the east sea will come to south Vietnam and have a complicated impact on provinces among in the Southern Middle of Vietnam. 

This morning, my the director of the hospital asked us to be ready to avoid stormy damages if it the storm occurs. All of the health workers were very scared. Besides preparing for the prevention of the damages from the typhoon, each of us hoped to get home earlier than usual.

When facing with such urgent events, humans usually think about their families, and wish they could be with them the most. So do I.