Can somebody correct my text?
I know this text isn't good but i didn't knew what i should write.
Dear Sir or Madame,
I want to complain about the bad working condition for workers in developing countries who are working for your company. Why don’t you pay them more money for their work? Don’t you feel responsible for the bad live of the workers? Money isn’t all. You shouldn’t take the supplier with the lowest prices you should take the supplier who treats his workers good and who pays enough money that the workers have enough money to buy everything they need for living. Moreover it isn’t good that the people had to work the whole day. It’s no use to work so long because after specified time you can’t concentrate yourself anymore consequently many mistakes happen.
Sincere regards
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Just typically speaking, someone who's in charge won't care about something like this and probably has heard it before. The smallest they can pay means the most profit that they make, and they aren't going to start listening to their conscience now. If they can get by and not get into trouble, typically speaking, they don't care who they screw over.
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Can somebody correct my text?
I know this text isn't very good but I didn't know what I should have written.
Dear Sir or Madame,
I want to complain about the bad working conditions for workers in developing countries who are working employed for at your company. Why don’t you pay them more money for their work? Don’t you feel responsible for the bad lives of the your workers? Money isn’t all there is in life. You shouldn’t take the supplier with the lowest prices, you should take the supplier who treats his workers good well and who pays them enough money so that the workers have enough money to buy everything they need for living. Moreover, it isn’t good that the people have to work the whole day. It’s no use to work so long, because after specified time you can’t concentrate yourself anymore. Consequently, many mistakes happen.
Sincere regards,
…….
1. "... there is in life." I improvised. You could take out the 'in life' part if you would like.
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