Please correct it guys :)

The author doesn’t expect as much such popularity that as most people desire are fhighly desirable. Author She focuses on herself so that she can have a role that is in the remembered for all the time. (these two sentences seem to contradict eachother - does she want fame or not?) This is proved by the way that, in all her novels she never write wrote her name as author, she just wrote "by the lady" in every single novel that she write (you already said never - so you don't need to say every single nove). This case is also reflected supported by to the personalities of the main characters personality. Bennet never asked for compensation (I don't think compensation is the right word - it imples money which you wouldn't ask from somebody you helped, maybe recognition or appreciation - which means that they notice her help and thank her] to from the people that she helped. Sincerity of heart and a clean pure soul makes are what bring Bennett finally has the happiest life among other of the characters of Pride and Prejudice.

Good job. Did you read Pride and Prejudice - it's quite a challanging book with complex language - so congratualtions. 

I wrote Three sentences in English. I am not certain they is right.Can you correct my writing?

"Hmm... Right.

I believe you swept every girl off her feet.// all the girls off their feet.

I believe you swept every girl along. This is correct but it just means you swept them along - it isn't an idiom like the first sentance.*

I believe you got all the love from all the girls. This sentance is correct but it's kind of funny - it would work as a song lyric. I think it's a little strange becuase you are saying 'I beleive - which shows uncertainty and then making a really bold, strong statement. A more normal sentance with a simialr meaning might be:

I believe all the girls love you. OR You get/got love from all the girls.

* An idiom is a phrase that has a literal meaning [eg. to sweep a girl off her feet - meaning that she falls over] and also has a well known figurative meaning [to sweep a girl off her feet - means to really impress her in a romantic way]. However, you have to use the idiom as a set phrase - so swept a girl along is not an idiom and doesn't have a figurative meaning.

Writing a Short Story

I love to write fiction stories.* I like to write flash fiction, a short story that has only a maximum of three hundred words. (or you could say 'a short story with less than three hundred words' - more informal) I am trying to write flash fiction in English, but I can't.
Usually I write in my own language, Indonesian. When I was trying to write in English, I found myself stuck with words. I can't find a better the right word to describe what I want to tell say.*
I think using the right word in a sentence is one of the main points when writing a stories. It can help to make a better story, so the story doesn't sound cheesy. I find many of stories was are cliche, have same main idea, but the writers can make the stories better with  by choosing the right word in the sentence with different conflict.*

* you could say either stories or fiction but it sounds strange to use both. If you say stories it is assumed to be fiction.

* tell puts a focus on the person you are telling the informationt to, so when you are writing a short story, it's a bit strange. You could say tell if you are writing to a particular person, say a letter. Or if you want to make the sentace focus on the people who will find out eg. 'we are writing to tell the world about our sufferening'.

* Not sure what you mean by 'with different conflict'.

Somehow I found it difficult

Hi everyone, finally i finally wrote a notebook after i found it finding it difficult to get started.
i I always wondering what should I write in this media and I decided to write about my recent activities.

I am an university student, my major in is microbiology and I must start my final project as a student. Yes, this is my last year in university as bachelor student (aamiin!). I must found   find my final project topic and then I will work in the laboratory for almost 3-5 month. Until now, i am not I haven't found it yet, because i am I am lazy~

I want to graduate soon, maybe in July 2014 and I want to study in Europe, or Japan or Korea as a graduate student to reach my dream to get of getting a Master Degree. I just a dream, dreaming is still allowed, isnt it? :D

That's it for today. My friend always said that there is no problem with my English, but I think it is  still lacking in many ways, so I hope there are any some suggestion and advice about my writing. Thank you very much for your time reading this mess :D

Notes:

- I'm not sure what you meant by 'after I found it difficult' 

- I on  it's own is always capital or in I'm or I'd > whenevery I means saya!

-'I decided to write about my activities recently' could mean that you recently decided to write - by putting 'recent activities' the meaning is clearer

- (aamiin!) - what does this mean? I don't think it's English. If you are just trying to casually express syour feelings you could use yipee - for excitment or yikes - if you are nervous about finishing - both are very informal.

- 'then I will work in the laboratory for almost 3-5 month.' - you don't need to say almost because you have already given a range. you could say 'almost 5 months' OR '3-5 months'
- 'because I am lazy~' - this is correct but I think in this kind of informal writing it sounds more natural to use I'm.

Grain Sizes

Grains of sand is are many different sizes, if we want to classification classify about the sizes of grains size of sand, we can used the Wentworth Scale, which classification  classifies sediments by their size in milimeters.

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